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You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● tell him/her how you found out● explain how you feel about the news● organise to meet your friend for a celebration. v.2

You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● tell him/her how you found out● explain how you feel about the news● organise to meet your friend for a celebration. v. 2
Dear Elaine, I hope you doing fine, I' m writing this letter to congratulate you on your engagement with Jason. Two days ago, I saw a picture of your engagement on Jason' s profile. I must say you both were looking amazing in those beautiful traditional attires. I' d be happier if you have told me yourself since we are friends for a long time. I was over the moon to hear about this and I still remember our college days when you and Jason started dating each other. I always said you both make a very cute couple and I' m very happy that you are hitched with the love of your life. We should meet plan a meet up to celebrate your engagement and we have not met for a couple of months. I' ll invite Jason and some of our college friends as well and we can go for dinner at our favorite restaurant the Reef. Please let me know if you are available next weekend. See you soon, Priyanka Tuli
Dear Elaine,

I hope
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you doing
fine,
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I&
#039; m writing this letter to congratulate you on your engagement with Jason.

Two days ago, I
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saw
a picture of your engagement on
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Jason&
#039; s profile. I
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must
say you both were looking amazing in those
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beautiful
traditional attires.
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I&
#039; d be happier if you have
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told
me yourself since we are friends for a long time.

I was over the moon to hear about this and I
still
remember our college days when you and Jason
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started
dating each other. I always said you both
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make
a
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very
cute couple and
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I&
#039; m
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very
happy that you
are hitched
with the
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love
of your life.

We should
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meet
plan a
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meet
up to celebrate your
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engagement and
we have not met for a couple of months.
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I&
#039; ll invite Jason and
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some
of our college friends as
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well and
we can go for dinner at our favorite restaurant the Reef.
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Please
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let
me know if you are available
next
weekend.

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See
you
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soon
,

Priyanka
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Tuli
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● tell him/her how you found out● explain how you feel about the news● organise to meet your friend for a celebration. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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