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You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter- say how you heard the news- arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house- explain what you will bring with you v.2

You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter- say how you heard the news- arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house- explain what you will bring with you v. 2
Dear Majid, I have informed that you got married recently and I am writing this letter to show my great happiness. I was on a business trip when I noticed about your wedding party. Saeid called me and told me that there will be a party at Hilton hotel next week. He insisted so much to convenience me to attend to your ceremony. I am aware of the fact that it was one of your unforgettable moments in your whole life and I explained him why it is impossible for me to come over. I would be so happy if we could meet each other after these long days. Hey man, I missed you so much and I wanted to schedule a time at your house next Monday if that would be OK with you. I will be back by then and we can have a fabulous time together. As you might know, I am going to turkey regularly and the most famous Turkish present is Baklava. You definitely going to love it as it tastes delicious. So, be prepared next Monday and do not forget to buy tea. I will be waiting to see you the coming Monday. Be safe, Jack
Dear Majid,

I have informed that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
married
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
recently and
I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my great happiness.

I was on a business trip when I noticed about your wedding party.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Saeid
called me and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that there will be a party at Hilton hotel
next
week. He insisted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much to convenience me to attend to your ceremony. I am aware of the fact that it was one of your unforgettable moments in your whole life and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
The verb 'to explain something to someone' requires a preposition.
him
why it is impossible for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over.

I would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
happy if we could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
each other after these long days. Hey
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
, I missed you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much and I wanted to schedule a time at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
next
Monday if that would be OK with you. I will be back by
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
then and
we can have a fabulous time together.

As you might know, I am going to turkey
regularly
and the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Turkish present is Baklava.
Did you mean "You're definitely going", "You are definitely going", or "You were definitely going"?
You definitely going
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
it as it tastes delicious.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
be prepared
next
Monday and do not forget to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
tea.

I will be waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you the coming Monday.

Be safe,

Jack
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter- say how you heard the news- arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house- explain what you will bring with you v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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