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You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks li v.1

You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks li v. 1
Dear John, I really enjoyed weekend with you and your family. Now I am back at home safely. You always be my best friend. When I came back home, I realized that I forgot my coat at your house. It is navy blue coat with thin black stripe in it. I think I left coat in the guest room on the dressing table. There are some stuff such as wallet, winter gloves, and hat inside my coat. Luckily, I had some cash in my jeans pocket which helped me to reach my home. I really need my wallet urgent because it has my driving license and credit cards. One of my colleagues leave next to your street and he commutes to everyday work. I would be grateful if you can give my stuff to him and then he would deliver to me. If you don' t get time then I will ask my colleague stop by at your home and pick up my stuff while driving to work. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Peter
Dear John,

I
really
enjoyed weekend with you and your family.
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Now
I am back at home
safely
. You
The adverb 'always' usually goes after the verb 'be'.
always be
my best friend.

When I came back home, I realized that I forgot my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
at your
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house
. It is navy blue
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coat
with thin black stripe in it. I
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think
I
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left
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coat
in the guest room on the dressing table. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
stuff such as wallet, winter gloves, and hat inside my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
. Luckily, I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cash in my jeans pocket which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to reach my home.

I
really
need my wallet urgent
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because
it has my driving license and credit cards. One of my colleagues
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
next
to your
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
street and
he commutes to everyday work. I would be grateful if you can give my stuff to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
him and
then he would deliver to me. If you
Possible spelling mistake found.
don&
#039; t
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get
time then I will ask my colleague
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
by at your home and pick up my stuff while driving to work.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best regards,

Peter
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks li v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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