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A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter-Give details of the accommodation. -What you think he should bring with him. -Sightseeing places he could visit. v.2

A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter-Give details of the accommodation. -What you think he should bring with him. -Sightseeing places he could visit. v. 2

Dear Rohan, I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of spirits. It is a pleasant information that you are coming to spent your few holiday at my town Bharuch. I am writing this letter to inform you that do not bother about anything during your trip including accommodation. There are plethora of lodges and luxurious hotels available near to my location. However, i would like you to stay with me at my home, if you do not have any concern. I have informed to my parents about your journey and they really excited to meet you after such a long period. Moreover, you do not have to carry more luggage except your clothes, other all arrangements will be done as per requirements. Furthermore, there are many places that you should never forget to visit. I also will take leave from job and will join you in visiting tourist places that will be easy for you i think, in that way will get time to spent quality time. " Statue of Unity " worlds tallest statue that you must visit. Apart from this we will also visit Saputara hill station that you would definitely like due to the amazing atmosphere. Other things will discuss when you will come. I hope to see you soon. Yours Sincerely, Bharat Prajapati.

Dear Rohan,

I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of spirits. It is 'information' is a mass noun (i.e., uncountable). Therefore, the preceding 'a' is probably wrong.pleasant information
a pleasant information
 that you are coming to spent your Possible agreement error. The noun holiday seems to be countable; consider using: "few holidays".few holidays
few holiday
 at my town Possible spelling mistake found.Baruch
Bharuch
. I am writing this letter to inform you that do not bother about anything during your trip including accommodation.

There are plethora of lodges and luxurious hotels available near to my location. However
, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like you to stay with me at my home, if you do not have any concern. I have informed to my parents about your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).journey, and
journey and
 they really
 excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you after such a long period. Moreover
, you do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 carry more luggage except your clothes, other all arrangements will be done
 as per requirements.

Furthermore
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places that you should never forget to visit. I also
 will take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 from job and will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in visiting tourist places that will be easy for Consider adding a comma here.you,
you
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, in that way will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 time to spent quality time. Possible spelling mistake found.quot
&quot
; Statue of Unity Possible spelling mistake found.quot
&quot
; worlds A determiner is probably missing here: "the tallest".the tallest
tallest
 statue that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 visit. Apart from this we will also
 visit Possible spelling mistake found.SalutarySápara
Saputara
 hill station that you would definitely like due to the amazing atmosphere. Other things will discuss when you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
.

I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Sincerely
,

Bharat Possible spelling mistake found.
Prajapati
. 

5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter-Give details of the accommodation. -What you think he should bring with him. -Sightseeing places he could visit. v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

223 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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