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A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter-Give details of the accommodation. -What you think he should bring with him. -Sightseeing places he could visit. v.2

A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter-Give details of the accommodation. -What you think he should bring with him. -Sightseeing places he could visit. v. 2
Dear Rohan, I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of spirits. It is a pleasant information that you are coming to spent your few holiday at my town Bharuch. I am writing this letter to inform you that do not bother about anything during your trip including accommodation. There are plethora of lodges and luxurious hotels available near to my location. However, i would like you to stay with me at my home, if you do not have any concern. I have informed to my parents about your journey and they really excited to meet you after such a long period. Moreover, you do not have to carry more luggage except your clothes, other all arrangements will be done as per requirements. Furthermore, there are many places that you should never forget to visit. I also will take leave from job and will join you in visiting tourist places that will be easy for you i think, in that way will get time to spent quality time. " Statue of Unity " worlds tallest statue that you must visit. Apart from this we will also visit Saputara hill station that you would definitely like due to the amazing atmosphere. Other things will discuss when you will come. I hope to see you soon. Yours Sincerely, Bharat Prajapati.
Dear Rohan,

I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of spirits. It is
'information' is a mass noun (i.e., uncountable). Therefore, the preceding 'a' is probably wrong.
a pleasant information
that you are coming to spent your
Possible agreement error. The noun holiday seems to be countable; consider using: "few holidays".
few holiday
at my town
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bharuch
. I am writing this letter to inform you that do not bother about anything during your trip including accommodation.

There are plethora of lodges and luxurious hotels available near to my location.
However
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like you to stay with me at my home, if you do not have any concern. I have informed to my parents about your
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
journey and
they
really
excited to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you after such a long period.
Moreover
, you do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
carry more luggage except your clothes, other all arrangements will
be done
as per requirements.

Furthermore
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
places that you should never forget to visit. I
also
will take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
from job and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
you in visiting tourist places that will be easy for
Consider adding a comma here.
you
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
, in that way will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
time to spent quality time.
Possible spelling mistake found.
&quot
; Statue of Unity
Possible spelling mistake found.
&quot
; worlds
A determiner is probably missing here: "the tallest".
tallest
statue that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
visit. Apart from this we will
also
visit
Possible spelling mistake found.
Saputara
hill station that you would definitely like due to the amazing atmosphere. Other things will discuss when you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
.

I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Bharat
Possible spelling mistake found.
Prajapati
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend of yours is visiting your region and has asked you to help to arrange accommodation. Write to him / her. In your letter-Give details of the accommodation. -What you think he should bring with him. -Sightseeing places he could visit. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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