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Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment v.2

Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment v. 2
Dear Ali, I hope you are doing fine today. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am going to start my own business so, I need your help to develop my company’s website. As you are aware that I am working in the recruitment department for the past ten years with different employers but now I have decided to run my own consultancy firm. Therefore, I would like your expertise to develop the easy to navigate and eye-catching website to attract qualified candidates to apply for the jobs. The website must have attributes like nationality, qualification, age, skills, experience, and location as this information would help me to match the candidates with the job description provided by the client. I have a budget of $ 5000, but I could pay up $8000 subject to the quality of the website, and it needs to be ready in next month time as I am currently doing some paperwork, and have a plan to roll out the company in maximum two months’ time. I look forward to hearing from you soon to discuss in more detail Your friend,
Dear Ali,

I hope you are doing fine
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today
.

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I am going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
business
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so
, I need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to develop my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s website.

As you are aware that I am working in the recruitment department for the past ten years with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
employers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have decided to run my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
consultancy firm.
Therefore
, I would like your expertise to develop the easy to navigate and eye-catching website to attract qualified candidates to apply for the jobs. The website
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have attributes like nationality, qualification, age,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, experience, and location as this information would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to match the candidates with the job description provided by the client.

I have a budget of
The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: "$5000".
$ 5000
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I could pay up $8000 subject to the quality of the website, and it needs to be ready in
next
month time as I am
currently
doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
paperwork, and have a plan to roll out the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in maximum two months’ time.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
to discuss in more detail

Your friend,
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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