You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. v.2
You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. v. 2
Dear Manager,
Today, I am writing to complain about the substandard services I received during the moonlit dinner I had with my friends this Tuesday evening.
To start with, after I arrived on time along with my friends, I waited in the queue for half an hour despite having reservation. Then, the lighting was not well-lit, which made visibility difficult. Next, I have complained about a fly in my soup; the staff apologised, but did not replace the bowl with a fresh one. Finally, the valet parking personnel misplaced my car keys and it took him a while to find it while I stood waiting for him.
My complaint is a learning lesson to everyone. With immediate effect, replace your indolent staff i. e. who are not showing interest in their work and not fast enough. I would also recommend changes to the terrace dining area, that is, illuminate it. Subsequently, this will improve customer service.
Due to the above inconveniences, I am demanding a full refund and if your impervious to my written complaint, I will sue you in the consumer court.
Regards,
Jack Dan
Dear Manager,
Today
, I am writing to complain about the substandard services I received during the moonlit dinner I had with my friends this Tuesday evening.
To
start
with, after I arrived on time along with my friends, I waited in the queue for half an hour despite having reservation. Then, the lighting was not well-lit, which made visibility difficult.
Next
, I have complained about a
fly
in my soup; the staff
apologised
,
but
did not replace the bowl with a fresh one.
Finally
, the valet parking personnel misplaced my car keys and it took him a while to find it while I stood waiting for him.
My complaint is a learning lesson to everyone. With immediate effect, replace your indolent staff
i. e.
who are not showing interest in their work and not
fast
enough
. I would
also
recommend
changes
to the terrace dining area,
that is
, illuminate it.
Subsequently
, this will
improve
customer service.
Due to the above inconveniences, I am demanding a full refund and if your impervious to my written complaint, I will sue you in the consumer court.
Regards,
Jack Dan
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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