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You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor, in your letter: Describe the problem. Say how long it has been a problem. Explain what action you want the neighbor to take. v.1

You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor, in your letter: Describe the problem. Say how long it has been a problem. Explain what action you want the neighbor to take. v. 1
Dear Mr. Brown, I am Md. Azharuddin and I live in an apartment block number: 4 which is located right beside your villa. I am writing this letter to express my problems caused due to your dog which keeps barking whole day when you are way for work. I am currently pursuing my PhD in computer science which requires me to work whole night, as a result I very often sleep during days, but due to extreme noise created by your pet during day time, I am unable to have quality sleep, due to which I am facing negative consequences on my studies. I initially thought of neglecting this, but it has been three months now with persisting problem. In this regards, I sincerely request you to feel my sufferings and move the pet to either your villa’s backyard or on the terrace before you leave for work in the morning. Moreover, We can discuss this personally to come-up with alternative solution. Thanks in advance to helping me in sorting this out. Await your response on this and feel free to visit my home anytime. Yours sincerely, Mohammed Azharuddin.
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am Md.
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Azharuddin
and I
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live
in an apartment block number: 4 which
is located
right beside your villa. I am writing this letter to express my problems caused due to your dog which
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keeps
barking whole day when you are way for work.

I am
currently
pursuing my PhD in computer science which requires me to work whole night,
as a result
I
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very
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often
sleep during days,
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but
due to extreme noise created by your pet during day time, I am unable to have quality sleep, due to which I am facing
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negative
consequences on my studies.
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I
initially
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thought
of neglecting this,
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but
it has been three months
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now
with persisting problem.

In
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this
regards, I
sincerely
request you to feel my sufferings and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
the pet to either your villa’s backyard or on the terrace
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before
you
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leave
for work in the morning.
Moreover
, We can discuss this
personally
to
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come
-up with alternative solution.

Thanks in advance to helping me in sorting this out. Await your response on this and feel free to visit my home anytime.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mohammed
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Azharuddin
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3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor, in your letter: Describe the problem. Say how long it has been a problem. Explain what action you want the neighbor to take. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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