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You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter• explain why you want to leave your current job• what kind of job you are looking for• ask for some help or advice v.2

You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter• explain why you want to leave your current job• what kind of job you are looking for• ask for some help or advice v. 2
Dear, I hope you have been keeping well. Since 5 years, I am working in an IT based company as a software engineer. Now, I am planning to search out some new job. Due to working in a sample company for so long, my saturation point in career has reached. I am facing eccentric issues like getting less salary or not getting timely promotion etc. I need to change my domain and wanted to work as a Business analyst. This shift will add new skills to my resume and help me understand more of the business domain also. However, being a naïve worker for this domain, I am unable to initiate myself and for this, I greatly need your assistance. As you are working in the business domain from past many years, please suggest or provide some tips, which can help me in learning this domain and make me able to think like an analyst as I’ve my interview scheduled next week. Hoping to hear back from you soon. Yours faithfully, Tanul
Dear,

I hope you have been keeping well. Since 5 years, I am working in an IT based
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company
as a software engineer.
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Now
, I am planning to search out
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some
new job.

Due to working in a sample
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company
for
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so
long, my saturation point in career has reached. I am facing eccentric issues like getting less salary or not getting timely promotion etc.

I need to
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change
my
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domain
and wanted to work as a Business analyst. This shift will
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add
new
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skills
to my resume and
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help
me understand more of the business
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domain
also
.

However
, being a naïve worker for this
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domain
, I am unable to initiate myself and for this, I
greatly
need your assistance. As you are working in the business
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domain
from past
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many
years,
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please
suggest or provide
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some
tips, which can
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help
me in learning this
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domain
and
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make
me able to
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think
like an analyst as I’ve my interview scheduled
next
week.

Hoping to hear back from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Tanul
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter• explain why you want to leave your current job• what kind of job you are looking for• ask for some help or advice v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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