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You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: •which course you have been applied for•why you cannot j v.6

You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: •which course you have been applied for•why you cannot j v. 6
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to join the course of your college for which I applied and was accepted. Let me explain the reasons for not attending the course in detail. I applied for Advertising and Marketing course from Amity University on 24th September and my application was accepted by the university. As this course would have helped me enhance my promotional and marketing skills which will aid me to enhance my career and future prospects. I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join the course as i gave an interview in McKinney company and have been selected for the job as an assistant manager with a decent salary and have accepted the offer. This will give me the opportunity to have an practical experience of the work culture and market. Moreover, it will help me to make goo contacts which will be beneficial in future. I would like to request you to consider me for the course in next year semester as I am willing to join the course to increase my knowledge and expertise. Moreover, if you could provide me the university handbook containing details of the various courses and their fees. I hope to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to
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join
the
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course
of your college for which I applied and was
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accepted
.
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Let
me
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explain
the reasons for not attending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in detail.

I applied for Advertising and Marketing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from Amity University on 24th September and my application was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
by the university. As this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
would have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me enhance my promotional and marketing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
which will aid me to enhance my career and future prospects.

I regret to inform you that I will not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
gave an interview in McKinney
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and have
been selected
for the job as an assistant manager with a decent salary and have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
the offer. This will give me the opportunity to have
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
practical experience of the work culture and market.
Moreover
, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
goo contacts which will be beneficial
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

I would like to request you to consider me for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in
next
year semester as I am willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to increase my knowledge and expertise.
Moreover
, if you could provide me the university handbook containing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
and their fees.

I hope to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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Prabhpreet
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Kaur
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: •which course you have been applied for•why you cannot j v. 6

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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