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You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: •which course you have been applied for•why you cannot j v.6

You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: •which course you have been applied for•why you cannot j v. 6
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to join the course of your college for which I applied and was accepted. Let me explain the reasons for not attending the course in detail. I applied for Advertising and Marketing course from Amity University on 24th September and my application was accepted by the university. As this course would have helped me enhance my promotional and marketing skills which will aid me to enhance my career and future prospects. I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join the course as i gave an interview in McKinney company and have been selected for the job as an assistant manager with a decent salary and have accepted the offer. This will give me the opportunity to have an practical experience of the work culture and market. Moreover, it will help me to make goo contacts which will be beneficial in future. I would like to request you to consider me for the course in next year semester as I am willing to join the course to increase my knowledge and expertise. Moreover, if you could provide me the university handbook containing details of the various courses and their fees. I hope to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to
join
the
course
of your college for which I applied and was
accepted
.
Let
me
explain
the reasons for not attending the
course
in detail.

I applied for Advertising and Marketing
course
from Amity University on 24th September and my application was
accepted
by the university. As this
course
would have
helped
me enhance my promotional and marketing
skills
which will aid me to enhance my career and future prospects.

I regret to inform you that I will not be able to
join
the
course
as
i
gave an interview in McKinney
company
and have
been selected
for the job as an assistant manager with a decent salary and have
accepted
the offer. This will give me the opportunity to have
an
practical experience of the work culture and market.
Moreover
, it will
help
me to
make
goo contacts which will be beneficial
in future
.

I would like to request you to consider me for the
course
in
next
year semester as I am willing to
join
the
course
to increase my knowledge and expertise.
Moreover
, if you could provide me the university handbook containing
details
of the various
courses
and their fees.

I hope to hearing from you
soon
.

Your
sincerely
,

Prabhpreet
Kaur
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: •which course you have been applied for•why you cannot j v. 6

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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