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You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Brita v.2

You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Brita v. 2
Dear Mr. Sullivan, I am a Spanish instructor in London. I am writing about your advertisement in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional for a Spanish instructor. From your advertisement in the magazine, I really interested to have more information about your language institution. Because I want to change my workplace. I have several years’ experiences at different language institution for teaching to different ages especially to teenagers. As you know to teach to teenagers are really difficult because some of them are not keen on learning the language and some parents forced them to learn a foreign language. Also, I have a master degree in the Spanish language from Oxford University and I have some certification in teaching method for foreign language If you are interested to have more information about my CV and resume, you can contact my email as smithbrown@yahoo. com or my cell phone 0018187234054. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Smith Brown
Dear Mr. Sullivan,

I am a Spanish instructor in London. I am writing about your advertisement in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional for a Spanish instructor.

From your advertisement in the magazine, I
really
interested to have more information about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
institution.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my workplace.

I have several years’ experiences at
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
institution for teaching to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ages
especially
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
. As you know to teach to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
are
really
difficult
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them are not keen on learning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
parents forced them to learn a foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
Also
, I have a master degree in the Spanish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
from Oxford University and I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
certification in teaching method for foreign language

If you
are interested
to have more information about my CV and resume, you can contact my email as
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smithbrown@yahoo
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
or my cell phone 0018187234054.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Smith Brown
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Brita v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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