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ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain v.2

ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I' m writing this letter to apply for a job of Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine teaching professional. When I learnt about your dynamic need of well-learned Spanish instructor I felt compelled to write you about my interest in job. As an energetic and professional enthusiast with my proven success in teaching Spanish, I' m well prepared to offer my strength and services to your institute. I have done Spanish language course with two years prior experience of teaching Spanish at Modern languages Coaching academy. I would like to tell you that apart from Spanish I' m also good in teaching French, and it would be of great help in translation activity. Besides, I' m an honest and amicable person with well-formed capacity to work. I think I can make a significant impact on your organization in this role. If you want to inquire more about me you can contact me through this mail: sumayyahawa@gmail. com. I' m also writing my number(0347195525) if need occurs. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

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was advertised
in the April edition of the magazine
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teaching
professional.

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When
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about your dynamic need of well-learned Spanish instructor I felt compelled to write you about my interest in job. As an energetic and professional enthusiast with my proven success in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
Spanish,
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I&
#039; m
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well prepared
to offer my strength and services to your institute. I have done Spanish language course with two years prior experience of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
Spanish at Modern languages Coaching academy. I would like to
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tell
you that apart from Spanish
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I&
#039; m
also
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good
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
French, and it would be of great
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help
in translation activity.
Besides
,
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I&
#039; m an honest and amicable person with well-formed capacity to work. I
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think
I can
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make
a significant impact on your organization in this role.

If you want to inquire more about me you can contact me through this mail:
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sumayyahawa@gmail
.
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com
.
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I&
#039; m
also
writing my number(0347195525) if need occurs.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours
faithfully
,
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS letter ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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