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You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. Say where you are goingDescribe your houseExplain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house v.7

You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. Say where you are goingDescribe your houseExplain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house v. 7
Dear Ron, Hope you are doing well. I' ll soon be traveling to Florida for a summer vacation. Meanwhile, I assume you' ll be the right person to look after my house while I' m away for a month. It' s been a long time that you' ve visited my place. Hence, let me elaborate that it is located on London street and the house number is 14. Also, there are few utilities like stove, iron and refrigerator in the house which will be useful for you during your stay. Moreover, I' ll expect you to take care of some fragile things that would require your utmost attention. I' ve a small garden at my backyard which has to be watered daily. Furthermore, my dog needs to be fed on time as well as he has to be taken for walks at dawn. I hope it is not a burden for you. I look forward to seeing your positive response. Best regards, Jonathan
Dear Ron,

Hope you are doing well.

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let
me elaborate that it
is located
on London street and the
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house
number is 14.
Also
, there are few utilities like stove, iron and refrigerator in the
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house
which will be useful for you during your stay.

Moreover
,
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I&
#039; ll
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expect
you to take care of
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some
fragile things that would require your utmost attention.
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I&
#039; ve a
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small
garden at my backyard which
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has to
be watered
daily.
Furthermore
, my dog needs to
be fed
on time
as well
as he
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has to
be taken
for walks at dawn.

I hope it is not a burden for you. I look forward to seeing your
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positive
response.

Best regards,

Jonathan
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. Say where you are goingDescribe your houseExplain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house v. 7

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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