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You have applied for a job at two different companies. Both have decided to choose you. Write a letter to decline one of the job offers. In your letter, apologize for not being able to accept that position and also your circumstances for turning them down v.2

You have applied for a job at two different companies. Both have decided to choose you. Write a letter to decline one of the job offers. In your letter, apologize for not being able to accept that position and also your circumstances for turning them down v. 2

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in response to your offer to work as a Creative Art Director at your esteemed agency. I am afraid, I shall not be able to accept it. Unfortunately, I have decided to take up another job opportunity coming my way. Little did I know of my chances of landing a better job profile at another popular advertising firm. A creative opportunity to lead a multi-regional team has been my dream and has finally manifested for me, into a reality. It truly was a dilemma, to choose between an enriching experience of being a part of your organization or pursuing my professional aspiration of acquiring a job title of a ' National Creative Director' . One of the other main reasons to decline this offer is the long hours of commuting. I would like to spend more time with my family. I apologize for the convenience, and sincerely want to thank you for considering me as a deserving candidate for the position offered. I admire your work environment and I truly appreciate your quick and favorable response. I wish you and your company good luck in the future. Yours sincerely, Kathy

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in response to your offer to work as a Creative Art Director at your esteemed agency. I am afraid, I shall not be able to accept it.

Unfortunately, I have decided to take up another job opportunity coming my way. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
Little
 did I know of my chances of landing a better job profile at another popular advertising firm. A creative opportunity to lead a multi-regional team has been my dream and has finally
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 One of the other main reasons to decline this offer is the long hours of commuting. I would like to spend more time with my family.

I apologize for the convenience, and sincerely
 want to thank you for considering me as a deserving candidate for the position offered. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 admire your work environment and I truly
 appreciate your quick and favorable response. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 wish you and your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 luck in the future.

Yours sincerely
,

Kathy

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You have applied for a job at two different companies. Both have decided to choose you. Write a letter to decline one of the job offers. In your letter, apologize for not being able to accept that position and also your circumstances for turning them down v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

196 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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