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You have applied for a job at two different companies. Both have decided to choose you. Write a letter to decline one of the job offers. In your letter, apologize for not being able to accept that position and also your circumstances for turning them down v. 2

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in response to your offer to work as a Creative Art Director at your esteemed agency. I am afraid, I shall not be able to accept it. Unfortunately, I have decided to take up another job opportunity coming my way. Little did I know of my chances of landing a better job profile at another popular advertising firm. A creative opportunity to lead a multi-regional team has been my dream and has finally manifested for me, into a reality. It truly was a dilemma, to choose between an enriching experience of being a part of your organization or pursuing my professional aspiration of acquiring a job title of a ' National Creative Director' . One of the other main reasons to decline this offer is the long hours of commuting. I would like to spend more time with my family. I apologize for the convenience, and sincerely want to thank you for considering me as a deserving candidate for the position offered. I admire your work environment and I truly appreciate your quick and favorable response. I wish you and your company good luck in the future. Yours sincerely, Kathy

IELTS letter You have applied for a job at two different companies. Both have decided to choose you. Write a letter to decline one of the job offers. In your letter, apologize for not being able to accept that position and also your circumstances for turning them down v.2

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in response to your offer to work as a Creative Art Director at your esteemed agency. I am afraid, I shall not be able to accept it.

Unfortunately, I have decided to take up another job opportunity coming my way.
Little
did I know of my chances of landing a better job profile at another popular advertising firm. A creative opportunity to lead a multi-regional team has been my dream and has
finally
manifested for me, into a reality.

It
truly
was a dilemma, to choose between an enriching experience of being a part of your organization or pursuing my professional aspiration of acquiring a job title of a ' National Creative
Director&
#039;
.
One of the other main reasons to decline this offer is the long hours of commuting. I would like to spend more time with my family.

I apologize for the convenience, and
sincerely
want to thank you for considering me as a deserving candidate for the position offered.
I
admire your work environment and I
truly
appreciate your quick and favorable response.
I
wish you and your
company
good
luck in the future.

Yours
sincerely
,

Kathy
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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