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A friend you made while you studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend v. 2

Dear Selena! I’m satisfying to inform you about one interesting position for you, about which my college Helen has told me recently. As you have interest in finding job in Russia, I can advise you the one. This vacation related to the construction area, especially in project administrating. This kind of work requires management skills and includes managing bosses’ schedule, orginising meetings with different colleges or companies’ leaders. In my opinion you obviously have appropriate knowledge about this as you studied this field. Also, I think you have excellent communication skills, I find you very responsible person and you can easily get this position. Selena, you just need to find this my company’s website and apply wit your update CV. Moreover, I’ll tell you the phone number which allows you to contact in direct your potential boss. I really hope you find in interesting for you, and can get this position very soon. Take care and let me know that everything is clear. Best wishes, Olga

IELTS letter A friend you made while you studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend v.2

Dear Selena!

I’m satisfying to inform you about one interesting position for you, about which my college Helen has
told
me recently.

As you have interest in finding job in Russia, I can advise you the one. This vacation related to the construction area,
especially
in project administrating. This kind of work requires management
skills
and includes managing bosses’ schedule,
orginising
meetings with
different
colleges or
companies
’ leaders.

In my opinion you
obviously
have appropriate knowledge about this as you studied this field.
Also
, I
think
you have excellent communication
skills
, I find you
very
responsible person and you can
easily
get
this position.

Selena, you
just
need to find this my
company
’s website and apply wit your update CV.
Moreover
, I’ll
tell
you the phone number which
allows
you to contact in direct your potential boss.

I
really
hope you find in interesting for you, and can
get
this position
very
soon
. Take care and
let
me know that everything is
clear
.

Best wishes,

Olga
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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Letter
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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