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write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for youmeeting detailsWhat you did not like about the hotelwhat you want organizer to do v.2

write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for youmeeting detailsWhat you did not like about the hotelwhat you want organizer to do v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the condition of the hotel, where I stayed for an urgent meeting. You are a prestigious agent and i always rely on your choice with regard to hotel and travel arrangements. My company has been working on a project for some time for an important client. The Project had a lot of technicalities and our customer had some difficulties to run it smoothly. Therefore, in order to solve the issue, I went turkey to guide the client in respect of converting the project into the process. The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey hotel. I stayed there from the evening of 22nd to morning of 24th of October in Room number 406. The Room was quite spacious and after the meeting, i was so tired that wanted to sleep immediately. But when i switched on the air-conditioner it was not working properly. I had to open the window, so that some fresh air can reduce the heat in the room. The Refrigerator was also not working at proper temperature and all the drinks were hot. It looked like bed sheets were also not charged after the previous tenant as there were spots on them. This was extremely frustrating, and I complained about the situation to the hotel manager, But to no avail. As hotel arrangement were not according to my requirements and service was really pathetic, hence I want you to refund half of my money and also report about hotel condition to its owner. So that other people do not face the same issues in the future. I want you to send the money in my bank account. Yours faithfully, SAIRA
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about the condition of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
, where I stayed for an urgent meeting.

You are a prestigious agent and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
always rely on your choice with regard to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
and travel arrangements. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has been working on a project for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time for an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
client. The Project had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
technicalities and our customer had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
difficulties to run it
smoothly
.
Therefore
, in order to solve the issue, I went turkey to guide the client in respect of converting the project into the process. The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
. I stayed there from the evening of 22nd to morning of 24th of October in Room number 406.

The Room was quite spacious and after the meeting,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
tired that wanted to sleep immediately.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
switched on the air-conditioner it was not working
properly
. I had to open the window,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
fresh air can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the heat in the room. The Refrigerator was
also
not working at proper temperature and all the drinks were hot. It looked like
This word is normally spelled as one.
bed sheets
were
also
not charged after the previous tenant as there were spots on them.

This was
extremely
frustrating, and I complained about the situation to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
manager,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
to no avail. As
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
arrangement were not according to my requirements and service was
really
pathetic,
hence
I want you to refund half of my money and
also
report about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
condition to its owner.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not face the same issues in the future.

I want you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the money in my bank account.

Yours
faithfully
,

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SAIRA
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for youmeeting detailsWhat you did not like about the hotelwhat you want organizer to do v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
282 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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