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You have received a letter from your friend who would like to visit you next month. However, you have some problems and will not be able to entertain your friend. Write a letter to your friend explaining your situation. You should: * Apologize* Explain your v.2

You have received a letter from your friend who would like to visit you next month. However, you have some problems and will not be able to entertain your friend. Write a letter to your friend explaining your situation. You should: * Apologize* Explain your v. 2
Dear Samira, It was a great pleasure and surprise to get your letter in the mailbox just after reaching home. I am very excited that you have finally decided to visit me. In your letter, you mentioned that you are coming in October. I am very sorry to say that, I will not be able to enjoy our time together in October. As you know, my last semester of MBA is about to come to an end. I will be having semester finals in October. I do not know the exact schedule of my examinations but the authority has confirmed that it will start from around the middle of October. Usually, finals take about 12 to 15 days to end. That means I will be occupied for the whole of October. However, after finishing the examination, I will be completely free. In fact, my classmates are planning for a trip to Srimangal after the examination. Please try and reschedule your time for November so that you can join us on our Srimangal trip. That is a marvelous place adorned with tea-gardens. You will have an amazing time. Also, I will have plenty of time to show you around my town. There will be no time constraints for attending classes or any study-related purposes. I hope you will understand my problem. Please consider my inability and make a plan for November. I cannot wait to see you and hang out with you like old times. With love, Sharna
Dear
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Samira
,

It was a great pleasure and surprise to
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get
your letter in the mailbox
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just
after reaching home. I am
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very
excited that you have
finally
decided to visit me.

In your letter, you mentioned that you are coming in October. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
sorry to say that, I will not be able to enjoy our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
together in October. As you know, my last semester of MBA is about to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
. I will be having semester finals in October. I do not know the exact schedule of my examinations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the authority has confirmed that it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
from around the middle of October.
Usually
, finals take about 12 to 15 days to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
. That means I will
be occupied
for the whole of October.
However
, after finishing the examination, I will be completely free. In fact, my classmates are planning for a trip to
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Srimangal
after the examination.
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Please
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
try and
reschedule your
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time
for November
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
us on our
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Srimangal
trip.
That is
a marvelous place adorned with tea-gardens. You will have an amazing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
Also
, I will have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you around my town. There will be no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
constraints for attending classes or any study-related purposes.

I hope you will understand my problem.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
consider my inability and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a plan for November. I cannot wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you and hang out with you like
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
times.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

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Sharna
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter You have received a letter from your friend who would like to visit you next month. However, you have some problems and will not be able to entertain your friend. Write a letter to your friend explaining your situation. You should: * Apologize* Explain your v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
246 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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