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Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter•Describe the problem•Say how long it has been a problem•Explain what action you want the neighbor to take v.2

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter•Describe the problem•Say how long it has been a problem•Explain what action you want the neighbor to take v. 2
Dear Mr. Smith, My name is John and I live in the house just next to your apartment. I am writing with regards to the problem that I am facing because of the constant barking of your dog, I am preparing for CFA exams, but due to the extreme barking of your dog, I can not concentrate on my studies. Sometimes your dog starts barking in the midnight and from the past few days, I am getting late for my work because I don’t get proper sleep in the night. I am facing this problem since last month. I was expecting that you will take your dog for checkup as this might be troubling you as well. Since no action has been taken by you till now, I am writing to direct your attention to this problem. I personally feel that your dog is suffering from some illness that causes him to bark continuously. You should consult a vet and take immediate steps to find the cause of the problem so that your dog gets cured as early as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John
Dear Mr. Smith,

My name is John and I
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live
in the
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house
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just
next
to your apartment. I am writing
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with regards to
the problem that I am facing
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because
of the constant barking of your dog,

I am preparing for CFA exams,
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but
due to the extreme barking of your
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dog
, I can not concentrate on my studies.
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Sometimes
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
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starts
barking in the midnight and from the past few days, I am getting late for my work
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because
I don’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
proper sleep in the night.

I am facing this problem since last month. I was expecting that you will take your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
for checkup as this might be troubling you
as well
. Since no action has
been taken
by you till
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I am writing to direct your attention to this problem.

I
personally
feel that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
is suffering from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
illness that causes him to bark
continuously
. You should consult a vet and take immediate steps to find the cause of the problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
cured as early as possible.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

John
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter•Describe the problem•Say how long it has been a problem•Explain what action you want the neighbor to take v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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