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Question: Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem. . Explain what action you want the neighbors to take v.2

Question: Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem. . Explain what action you want the neighbors to take v. 2
Dear Mr. Mosit, I am writing this letter to bring into your notice about the rotten smell emanating from your backyard. Since last two weeks, we have been experiencing bad smell and when tried to find it out the root, we got confirmed that it is from your backyard. Initially my perception was it could be from my house so I invited the specialist cleaner to clean my house in order to get rid of smell last week but it was confirmed that it is coming from right side of my house wall which is your house. Looks like you or your tenants have forgot to place the garbage on street to get picked which might be the reasons for bad air. If this is the case, you may instruct your family members to keep garbage on street instead of backyard which cause problems for others. Also, recently I have observed that your tenants do not use dustbin and throw litters from 2nd floor which sometimes fell on my terrace and cause uncleanliness at my house. I am looking forward to hearing from you. From Sincerely, PATH
Dear Mr.
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Mosit
,

I am writing this letter to bring into your notice about the rotten smell emanating from your backyard. Since last two weeks, we have been experiencing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
smell and when tried to find it out the root, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
confirmed that it is from your backyard.
Initially
my perception was it could be from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I invited the specialist cleaner to clean my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
rid of smell last week
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it
was confirmed
that it is coming from right side of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
wall which is your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Looks like you or your tenants have
Use past participle here: "forgotten".
forgot
to place the garbage on street to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
picked which might be the reasons for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
air. If this is the case, you may instruct your family members to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
garbage on street
instead
of backyard which cause problems for others.
Also
, recently I have observed that your tenants do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
dustbin and throw litters from 2nd floor which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
fell on my terrace and cause uncleanliness at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

From
Sincerely
,

PATH
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter Question: Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem. . Explain what action you want the neighbors to take v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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