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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v.5

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 5
Dear sir or Madam, I am a resident of the central Seoul city, South Korea. I am writing to recommend one of the best restaurants I have been to lately. I hope you would write a review of this establishment for more people to learn about this great establishment. It was my birthday and we visited a Korean restaurant on Friday in my town. Personally, I did not expect anything special about it because my originally booked Italian restaurant was cancelled due to some unavoidable reasons. I was feeling a bit gloomy but the Korean restaurant's ambient presence and warm welcome revived my mood. We ordered BBQ and ice-noodles and they served not only an incredibly delicious meal but also offered us the best possible service. Moreover, the restaurant's manager told that most of the ingredients came from organic farms. The noodles tasted celestial and the BBQ was perfectly grilled. The restaurant was a wonderful choice for the celebration on top of its great location. I am convinced that people would love to be there and would find it a pocket-friendly restaurant that serves highly palatable food. It would be a good idea if you recommended the restaurant in your newspaper. Yours faithfully, Jack Seojun
Dear sir or Madam,

I am a resident of the central Seoul city, South Korea. I am writing to recommend one of the best
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restaurants
I have been
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to
lately.
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I
hope you would write a review of this establishment for more
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people
to learn about this great establishment.

It was my
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birthday and
we visited a Korean
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restaurant
on Friday in my town.
Personally
, I did not
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expect
anything special about it
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because
my
originally
booked Italian
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restaurant
was cancelled
due to
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some
unavoidable reasons. I was feeling a bit gloomy
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but
the Korean restaurant's ambient presence and warm welcome revived my mood. We ordered BBQ and
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ice-noodles and
they served not
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only
an
incredibly
delicious meal
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but
also
offered us the best possible service.

Moreover
, the restaurant's manager
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told
that most of the ingredients came from organic farms. The noodles tasted celestial and the BBQ was
perfectly
grilled. The
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restaurant
was a wonderful choice for the celebration on top of its great location.

I
am convinced
that
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people
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to be there and would find it a pocket-friendly
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restaurant
that serves
highly
palatable food. It would be a
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good
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idea
if you recommended the
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restaurant
in your newspaper.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jack
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Seojun
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6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. v. 5

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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