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Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation. v.1

Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about a severe condition in my neighbourhood created by some teenagers who make the life of ordinary citizens difficult especially by letting their dangerous dogs roam freely in the streets. I have been residing in this town for the last five years. It was a peaceful locality up until recently. The situation deteriorated, perhaps because some new families settled in here lately who have teenage children who they have no control over. These youngsters all have untrained bulldogs who accompany them all the time. The cause of concern is that they often let the dogs go free and run behind them as if they are competing. This creates fear and terror among other well-disposed residents. On the contrary, they misbehave with elderly and use offensive words in the open streets. In this worrisome and tensed situation, I would expect you to take proper actions to restore the peacefulness in the neighbourhood. This would be a sigh of relief for all residents. I sincerely hope you would take immediate actions against all those involved in creating havoc in this peaceful community. Yours faithfully, Mubashir Noorani
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about a severe condition in my
neighbourhood
created by
some
teenagers
who
make
the life of ordinary citizens difficult
especially
by letting their
dangerous
dogs roam
freely
in the streets.

I have been residing in this town for the last five years. It was a peaceful locality up until recently. The situation deteriorated, perhaps
because
some
new families settled in here lately
who
have teenage children
who
they have no control over. These youngsters all have untrained bulldogs
who
accompany them all the time. The cause of concern is that they
often
let
the dogs go free and run behind them as if they are competing. This creates fear and terror among other well-disposed residents.
On the contrary
, they misbehave with elderly and
use
offensive words in the open streets.

In this worrisome and tensed situation, I would
expect
you to take proper actions to restore the peacefulness in the
neighbourhood
. This would be a sigh of relief for all residents.

I
sincerely
hope you would take immediate actions against all those involved in creating havoc in this peaceful community.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mubashir
Noorani
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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