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You got to know about a certain position that interests you at an information session conducted for college students. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the firm. In your letterintroduce yourselftalk about what special skill v.2

You got to know about a certain position that interests you at an information session conducted for college students. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the firm. In your letterintroduce yourselftalk about what special skill v. 2
Dear Mr. Norman, my name is Edward Lee. I am currently in the final year of my post-graduation studies in Business Science from Yale University. I would like to offer my application for the post of associate Consultant at ignited Mins, Inc. The Chief Technology Officer, Mr. Todd Hicks, suggested that I apply for the position when I recently spoke with him at the information session conducted for college students at the Plaza Hotel. enclosed with this letter is my resume, which provides further details of my previous experience and qualification. I have worked closely with a management-consulting firm< span class=" hiddenSpellError" pre=" management-consulting " > < /span> as part of our year project. I have also enclosed the recommendation letter given by the manager. I am confident that I can make a significant contribution to your firm. Based on my qualifications and experience, I believe that I will be a good fit for your organization. I look forward to meeting you in person to discuss the possibility of working at ignited Minds, Inc. Thank you for your time and consideration. Your sincerely, Edward Lee.
Dear Mr. Norman,

my name is Edward Lee. I am
currently
in the final year of my post-graduation studies in Business Science from Yale University. I would like to offer my application for the post of associate Consultant at ignited
Mins
, Inc.

The Chief Technology Officer, Mr. Todd Hicks, suggested that I apply for the position when I recently spoke with him at the information session conducted for college students at the Plaza Hotel.
enclosed
with this letter is my resume, which provides
further
details
of my previous experience and qualification.

I have worked
closely
with a management-consulting
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enclosed the recommendation letter
given
by the manager.
I
am confident that I can
make
a significant contribution to your firm. Based on my qualifications and experience, I believe that I will be a
good
fit for your organization.

I look forward to meeting you in person to discuss the possibility of working at ignited Minds, Inc. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Your
sincerely
,

Edward Lee.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS letter You got to know about a certain position that interests you at an information session conducted for college students. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the firm. In your letterintroduce yourselftalk about what special skill v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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