Dear Mr. Norman,
my name is Edward Lee. I am currently in the final year of my post-graduation studies in Business Science from Yale University. I would like to offer my application for the post of associate Consultant at ignited Mins, Inc.
The Chief Technology Officer, Mr. Todd Hicks, suggested that I apply for the position when I recently spoke with him at the information session conducted for college students at the Plaza Hotel. enclosed with this letter is my resume, which provides further details of my previous experience and qualification.
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I look forward to meeting you in person to discuss the possibility of working at ignited Minds, Inc. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Your sincerely,
Edward Lee.
Dear Mr. Norman,
my name is Edward Lee. I am
currently
in the final year of my post-graduation studies in Business Science from Yale University. I would like to offer my application for the post of associate Consultant at ignited
Mins
, Inc.
The Chief Technology Officer, Mr. Todd Hicks, suggested that I apply for the position when I recently spoke with him at the information session conducted for college students at the Plaza Hotel.
enclosed
with this letter is my resume, which provides
further
details
of my previous experience and qualification.
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a significant contribution to your firm. Based on my qualifications and experience, I believe that I will be a
good
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I look forward to meeting you in person to discuss the possibility of working at ignited Minds, Inc. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Your
sincerely
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Edward Lee.
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