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You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to In your letter say what the content of the music concert is where and when is the v. 2

Dear Kevin, Hope you are well and this letter find you perfect. I know that it has been a long time since we had meet last time, I am so sorry for this. I tell you what. I am writing to ask whether you can come with me for Metallica Live Concert on the next weekend in Paris. In fact, I have expected to go with my elder brother but he will not attend due to his hectic schedule for business reasons. You know that as he works in a global company, he will be send to the United Kingdom as a member of a team to sign some business project and in order to boost market productivity of his firm. If you ok, we are going to fly on Friday by 11: 00Pm airplane to France by using France Airlines and we will stay just one night in three star hotel. Don’t worry about prices of flight and accommodation as I booked all of them in advance last month. It will not much cost. If you want to accompany with me please let me know before on Saturday Kevin. I look forward to hearing positive response from you in the near future. All the best my friend.

IELTS letter You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to In your letter say what the content of the music concert is where and when is the v.2

Dear Kevin,

Hope you are well and this letter find you perfect. I know that it has been a long time since we had
meet
last time, I am
so
sorry for this.

I
tell
you what.
I
am writing to ask whether you can
come
with me for Metallica
Live
Concert on the
next
weekend in Paris.

In fact, I have
expected
to
go with
my elder brother
but
he will not attend due to his hectic schedule for business reasons. You know that as he works in a global
company
, he will be
send
to the United Kingdom as a member of a team to
sign
some
business project and in order to boost market productivity of his firm.

If you ok, we are going to
fly
on Friday by 11:
00Pm
airplane to France by using France
Airlines and
we will stay
just
one night in
three star
hotel
.

Don’t worry about prices of flight and accommodation as I booked all of them in advance last month. It will not much cost.

If you want to
accompany with
me
please
let
me know
before
on Saturday Kevin.

I look forward to hearing
positive
response from you in the near future.

All the best my friend.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo
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