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You eat at your college canteen every time. You think it needs some improvements. write a letter to the principal. In your letter: . discuss what you like about the canteen. what you do not like about it. . suggest improvements v.2

You eat at your college canteen every time. You think it needs some improvements. write a letter to the principal. In your letter: . discuss what you like about the canteen. what you do not like about it. . suggest improvements v. 2
Dear Sir I am one of the third year students of your college and writing this letter to draw your attention towards several issues of the cafeteria which need to be improved. I always have my two times meal at college canteen. The quality of the food provided is very good. Besides that, all the eatables are available at reasonable prices which can be easily affordable by all the learners. Moreover, cafeteria is quite large and has proper ventilation which is a good thing as students do not feel difficulties while sitting in canteen during summer days. On other hand there are some problems which need to look upon. There is no proper place to dump the wasted food and to place the used plates. So, students leave their plates on the table which make the environment unhygienic as the flies keep on roaming on the food left on tables. It is necessary to take action to resolve these issues otherwise there might be chances of diseases to spread. To throw the left over eatables, dustbins must be placed in one corner and trolleys or racks should be provided to place the used plates. I hope that you will think about the outcomes of the issues and try to resolve them. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully John Smith
Dear Sir

I am one of the third year students of your college and writing this letter to draw your attention towards several issues of the cafeteria which need to be
improved
.

I always have my two times meal at college canteen. The quality of the food provided is
very
good
.
Besides
that, all the eatables are available at reasonable prices which can be
easily
affordable by all the learners.
Moreover
, cafeteria is quite large and has proper ventilation which is a
good
thing as students do not feel difficulties while sitting in canteen during summer days.

On other hand there are
some
problems which need to look upon. There is no proper place to dump the wasted food and to place the
used
plates.
So
, students
leave
their plates on the table which
make
the environment unhygienic as the flies
keep
on roaming on the food
left
on tables.

It is necessary to take action to resolve these issues
otherwise
there might be chances of diseases to spread. To throw the
left
over eatables, dustbins
must
be placed
in one corner and trolleys or racks should
be provided
to place the
used
plates. I hope that you will
think
about the outcomes of the issues and try to resolve them.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


John Smith
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter You eat at your college canteen every time. You think it needs some improvements. write a letter to the principal. In your letter: . discuss what you like about the canteen. what you do not like about it. . suggest improvements v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
221 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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