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Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking problems and suggest some solution. . What are the problems. . Why should solve the problems. . How to solve the problems. v.2

Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking problems and suggest some solution. . What are the problems. . Why should solve the problems. . How to solve the problems. v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complaint you about the parking problem which I am facing on daily basis, no matter I am coming to office or leaving on time. Let me explain my situation in detail. The first and the foremost conundrum is no categorization of parking areas of vehicles such as two-wheelers and four-wheelers which is the primary reason for not having inadequate space for placing our cars. Secondly, I have also seen many outsiders are using our location without any permission. I think you must have to solve this unacceptable situation because everyone is facing multifarious difficulties due to this. Though, we can left our costly vehicles on the road, yet I found those area already occupied by people. Moreover, this practice will surge the traffic and afterwards culminates in a mammoth difficulty to reach office on time. Would you please take some action to resolve this? At first you should make rule to allow only authorised personnel to enter our parking slot. Secondly, slots are divided in category for every type of transport vehicle. I hope you will consider my situation and do the needful as soon as possible. Yours truly, Vinod
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complaint you about the parking problem which I am facing on daily basis, no matter I am coming to office or leaving on time.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in detail. The
first
and the foremost conundrum is no categorization of parking areas of vehicles such as
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two-wheelers
and
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four-wheelers
which is the primary reason for not having inadequate space for placing our cars.
Secondly
, I have
also
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seen
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many
outsiders are using our location without any permission.

I
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think
you
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must
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have to
solve this unacceptable situation
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because
everyone is facing multifarious difficulties due to this. Though, we can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "leave"
left
our costly vehicles on the road,
yet
I found
Did you mean "this area" or "those areas"?
those area
already occupied by
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people
.
Moreover
, this practice will surge the traffic and afterwards culminates in a mammoth difficulty to reach office on time.

Would you
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please
take
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some
action to resolve this? At
The comma is probably missing here: "first, you".
first you
should
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make
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rule
to
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allow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
Possible spelling mistake. 'authorised' is British English.
authorised
personnel to enter our parking slot.
Secondly
, slots
are divided
in category for every type of transport vehicle.

I hope you will consider my situation and do the needful as
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soon
as possible.

Yours
truly
,

Vinod
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking problems and suggest some solution. . What are the problems. . Why should solve the problems. . How to solve the problems. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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