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You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on- which places they should visit- where should they live- Invite them to do something with you v.2

You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on- which places they should visit- where should they live- Invite them to do something with you v. 2
Dear Gaurav, I am happy to receive your letter last week and excited to know that your parents are visiting Delhi. It will be a real pleasure for me to assist them in making this stay quite memorable. As you know, their are multiple places to visit in this city especially the chandni chowk market which has variety of tasty food items to be served. I also suggest them to visit Bangla sahib gurdwara as they are very much inclined towards visiting devotional places. Another good option will be to plan visit to Taj Mahal, this is the only place from our country which is included in 7 wonders of world and is only 2 hours drive away. Admittedly, the location where you stay plays a key role for comfortable stay. I insist to book room in one of the hotels at aerocity, this place has corridor of hotels from well known International brands such as Lemmon Tree, Taj and Novotel. Moreover, this play is just 10 minutes away from the airport and chances of traffic issues are almost negligible. I would also like to host dinner for them at my place so that they get opportunity to meet my parents and can enjoy home cooked food for a day. I will look forward to have your views on this plan and accordingly will make required logistics arrangements. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincereley, chomu kumar
Dear Gaurav,

I am happy to receive your letter last week and excited to know that your parents are visiting Delhi. It will be a real pleasure for me to assist them in making this stay quite memorable.

As you know,
their
are multiple
places
to visit in this city
especially
the
chandni
chowk
market which has variety of tasty food items to
be served
. I
also
suggest them to visit
Bangla
sahib
gurdwara
as they are
very
much inclined towards visiting devotional
places
. Another
good
option will be to plan visit to Taj Mahal, this is the
only
place
from our country which
is included
in 7 wonders of world and is
only
2 hours drive away.

Admittedly
, the location where you stay plays a key role for comfortable stay. I
insist to book
room in one of the hotels at
aerocity
, this
place
has corridor of hotels from well known International brands such as
Lemmon
Tree,
Taj
and
Novotel
.
Moreover
, this play is
just
10 minutes away from the airport and chances of traffic issues are almost negligible. I would
also
like to host dinner for them at my
place
so
that they
get
opportunity to
meet
my parents and can enjoy home cooked food for a day.

I will look forward
to have
your views on this plan and
accordingly
will
make
required logistics arrangements. Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Yours
sincereley
,

chomu
kumar
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
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IELTS letter You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on- which places they should visit- where should they live- Invite them to do something with you v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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