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You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: •apologize for the mistake•find out how important v.2

You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: •apologize for the mistake•find out how important v. 2
Dear John, It’s your pal, Truong. I am writing this letter to you because I just find out that I haven’t returned the computer textbook that I borrowed you last semester. Unfortunately, you had informed me that you left Vietnam last week and I totally forgot to hand the book to you. Hence, I am very sorry and I apologize for my absent-mindedness. Please let me know if this textbook is really important to you and also you’re in need of it at the moment. If so, I will immediately have the book delivered to your house in Canada by the fastest service in Vietnam. For now, I’ll keep your book carefully on my shelter. Just to comfort you, your textbook has given me a lot of important knowledge that I needed in the last term and I can’t give enough thanks to you for lending me this book. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Your friend, Truong Nguyen
Dear John,

It’s your pal,
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Truong
. I am writing this letter to you
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because
I
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just
find out that I haven’t returned the computer textbook that I borrowed you last semester. Unfortunately, you had informed me that you
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left
Vietnam last week and I
totally
forgot to hand the book to you.
Hence
, I am
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very
sorry and I apologize for my absent-mindedness.

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Please
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let
me know if this textbook is
really
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important
to you and
also
you’re in need of it at the moment. If
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so
, I will immediately have the book delivered to your
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house
in Canada by the fastest service in Vietnam. For
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now
, I’ll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
your book
carefully
on my shelter.
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Just
to comfort you, your textbook has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
me
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a lot of
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important
knowledge that I needed in the last term and I can’t give
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enough
thanks to you for lending me this book.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Your friend,

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Truong
Nguyen
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: •apologize for the mistake•find out how important v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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