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You are going on a short training course at a collage in Green mount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situationdescribe the accommodat v.2

You are going on a short training course at a collage in Green mount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situationdescribe the accommodat v. 2
Dear Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat, I am one of the selected candidates for the short course in your college. I am writing this letter to seek accommodation near the college from the 7 months. I do not have any contact in the city for that reason, I request you to provide valuable information about hostels or cottage in nearby areas. I am looking for the separate single room with washroom attached. If the kitchen is available that will be more convenient. More important the pets should not be in the house as I have allergic to dogs or cats. Walkable distance from the college will be a great option, still, I can manage if the location is a little far. Although the course is starting from 3rd July and it will finish on 30th November 2019, my ticket for Ireland from India are booked for 20th June. Therefore, I request you to look for a period of 7 months. I hope you will not have any difficulty in helping me and I will be really grateful to you. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
Dear Sir,

My name is Vishal
Bhat
, I am one of the selected candidates for the short course in your college. I am writing this letter to seek accommodation near the college from the 7 months. I do not have any contact in the city for that reason, I request you to provide valuable information about hostels or cottage in nearby areas.

I
am looking for the separate single room with washroom attached.
If
the kitchen is available that will be more convenient. More
important
the pets should not be in the
house
as I have allergic to dogs or cats. Walkable distance from the college will be a great option,
still
, I can manage if the location is a
little
far.

Although the course is starting from 3rd July and it will finish on 30th November 2019, my ticket for Ireland from India
are booked
for 20th June.
Therefore
, I request you to look for a period of 7 months.

I hope you will not have any difficulty in helping me and I will be
really
grateful to you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Vishal
Bhat
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You are going on a short training course at a collage in Green mount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situationdescribe the accommodat v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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