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A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Give information about the flatProvide any important in v.3

A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Give information about the flatProvide any important in v. 3
Dear Mohan, Thank you so much for accepting my humble request; without you, it would have a tedious task to find someone faithful. I want to mention some necessary information regarding my flat so that finding my house will be ease for you. My flat Number is 401 at 7th floor of Vaswani apartment near MG Road, Bengaluru. You won' t be having any trouble to find out my flat, as it is one of the famous society, anyways you have google map to get an accurate location. You need to follow some specific instruction while staying in my flat: you should show up by 12 O' Clock at night; otherwise you have to fill a formality form, collect milk regularly at 6. 00 AM, keep the front door always close as recently one robbery case happened and finally please take care of my pet dog. In case of any emergency situation or any difficulties, either give a ring to me or to the society chief so that you will get help immediately and also never forget to call the police if the situation gets out of control by any means; the police station is just 100 meters away from my apartment. I will be accompanying you for the first day, and I can' t wait to see you here. Your Friend, Manas
Dear
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Mohan
,

Thank you
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so
much for accepting my humble request; without you, it would have a tedious task to find someone faithful. I want to mention
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some
necessary information regarding my
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flat
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so
that finding my
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house
will be
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ease
for you.

My
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flat
Number is 401 at 7th floor of
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Vaswani
apartment near MG Road, Bengaluru. You
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won&
#039; t be having any trouble to find out my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flat
, as it is one of the
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famous
society, anyways you have google map to
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get
an accurate location.

You need to follow
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some
specific instruction while staying in my
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flat
: you should
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show
up by 12
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O&
#039; Clock at night;
otherwise
you
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have to
fill a formality form, collect milk
regularly
at 6. 00 AM,
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keep
the front door always close as recently one robbery case happened and
finally
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please
take care of my pet dog.

In case of any emergency situation or any difficulties, either give a ring to me or to the society chief
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so
that you will
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get
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help
immediately and
also
never forget to call the police if the situation
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gets
out of control by any means; the police station is
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just
100 meters away from my apartment.

I will be accompanying you for the
first
day, and I
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can&
#039; t wait to
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see
you here.

Your Friend,

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Manas
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Give information about the flatProvide any important in v. 3

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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