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You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include: -Where you are going-What the favor is-Why you need this friend to help v.2

You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include: -Where you are going-What the favor is-Why you need this friend to help v. 2
Dear Tuan, I hope this letter finds you well, my friend. I’m writing to ask if you could give me a hand taking care of my house this weekend. As you’ve known, I’m having a 3-day business trip to Da Nang to close a deal for my company on this weekend. During this time, I couldn’t do my daily housework. So, It’d be nice if you could do me this favor while I’m gone. Don’t worry, I won’t ask you to do any cleaning of the house. But, please keep an eye on my cat and feed him 3 times a day. There’s a sticker on the fridge which tells you how to feed him the right way and where you can find the food, so, be sure to give it a look. Also, since our neighbors have reported some robberies lately, please watch out for thieves at day and make sure every door is locked at night. I’m sorry for any inconvenience but you’re the only one I trust since we’ve been good friends for ages. When I get back, let’s hang out and grab some drinks, my treats! Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your friend, Truong
Dear
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Tuan
,

I hope this letter finds you well, my friend. I’m writing to ask if you could give me a hand taking care of my
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house
this weekend.

As you’ve known, I’m having a 3-day business trip to
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Da
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Nang
to close a deal for my
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company
on this weekend. During this time, I couldn’t do my daily housework.
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So
, It’d be nice if you could do me this favor while I’m gone.

Don’t worry, I won’t ask you to do any cleaning of the
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house
.
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But
,
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please
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keep
an eye on my cat and feed him 3 times a day. There’s a sticker on the fridge which
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tells
you how to feed him the right way and where you can find the food,
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so
, be sure to give it a look.
Also
, since our neighbors have reported
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some
robberies lately,
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please
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watch
out for thieves at day and
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make
sure every door
is locked
at night.

I’m sorry for any inconvenience
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but
you’re the
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only
one I trust since we’ve been
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good
friends for ages. When I
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get
back,
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let
’s hang out and grab
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some
drinks, my treats!

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Your friend,

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Truong
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include: -Where you are going-What the favor is-Why you need this friend to help v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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