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Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for help. In your letter: 1. explain why your son needs help2. ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods3. and suggest a po v.2

Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for help. In your letter: 1. explain why your son needs help2. ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods3. and suggest a po v. 2
Dear Ms Brown, This well considered letter is with regards to seek an additional favor towards the second language learned by my child in the school curriculum. As a starting point, my son ' John Wilson' lacks the basic knowledge about the ' French' language. From the past weeks, I had tried to assess him on the level of course completion in the class. However, to my surprise he is not even well-verse with the alphabets and shows no interest in the language. Not only this, it seems he does not even attend his lectures as it was reported by his Principal. Though, I am not authorize to question your abilities and the competency skills. And if you do-not mind and will it be possible for you to share your total occurrences along with the language methods taught in the class. This will not help me to identify the gap, nonetheless, i will be able to follow the course layout. Since, it is imperative for the child to pass on the A1 level to be held next month; November 2019. Henceforth, I would like to make some recommendations. Firstly, a daily homework added in the schedule will develop enthusiasm for the effective learning. Secondly, a daily progress report will be an extra advantage for all the pupils learning a language in the school that will allow them to track their progress on the course completion. I hope you will look into the suggestions made and looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Mansi Singh
Dear Ms Brown,

This well considered letter is
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
seek an additional favor towards the second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
learned by my child in the school curriculum.

As a starting point, my son ' John
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Wilson&
#039; lacks the basic knowledge about the '
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French&
#039;
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. From the past weeks, I had tried to assess him on the level
of course
completion in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.
However
, to my surprise he is not even well-verse with the alphabets and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
no interest in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
this, it seems he does not even attend his lectures as it
was reported
by his Principal.

Though, I am not
Consider using a past participle here: "authorized".
authorize
to question your abilities and the competency
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. And if you do-not mind and will it be possible for you to share your total occurrences along with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
methods taught in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. This will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to identify the gap, nonetheless,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will be able to
The usual verb for "courses" in a school is "take" or "attend" not "follow." Try it like this: "take the courses".
follow the course
layout.

Since, it is imperative for the child to pass on the A1 level to
be held
next
month; November 2019. Henceforth, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
recommendations.
Firstly
, a daily homework
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
in the schedule will develop enthusiasm for the effective learning.
Secondly
, a daily progress report will be an extra advantage for all the pupils learning a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in the school that will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
their progress on the course completion.

I hope you will look into the suggestions made and looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Mansi
Singh
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for help. In your letter: 1. explain why your son needs help2. ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods3. and suggest a po v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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