Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You are study for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter. -Ask for sometime of the complete a qualification-suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. -Say how the v.2

You are study for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter. -Ask for sometime of the complete a qualification-suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. -Say how the v. 2
Dear sir I am employer of your esteemed company who works as a web designer from last two years. The purpose of mind to penning down this epistle into request you to consel me the leave for two days. As I am learning ' Advance java' from a training centre and now, it is the last part of my learning in which I have to submit the project on next Monday. Unfortunately, I have not yet complete my project work. Due to this reason, I request you for some time off from work. So, I can able to complete the whole project work and submit it, on the time. I would assured you, if you give me grant them I will do extra time in the office. Moreover, I can complete all my pending tasks in the extra time. It is beneficial for me as well as the company growth. In this training, I learnt a lot of things about making a website more eye-catching and portable. With the help it, we can able to acquire the break-through in the future in the field of information technology. I would be very grateful if you give me to the permission for two days. I am look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully 22nd February 2018 Aman
Dear sir

I am employer of your esteemed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
who works as a web designer from last two years. The purpose of mind to penning down this epistle into request you to
Possible spelling mistake found.
consel
me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for two days.

As I am learning ' Advance
Possible spelling mistake found.
java&
#039; from a training
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, it is the last part of my learning in which I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
submit the project on
next
Monday. Unfortunately, I have not
yet
complete my project
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. Due to this reason, I request you for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time off from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I
Please check whether one of these words is redundant.
can able to
complete the whole project
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and submit it, on the time. I would
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "assure"
assured
you, if you give me grant them I will do extra time in the office.
Moreover
, I can complete all my pending tasks in the extra time.

It is beneficial for me
as well
as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
growth. In this training, I
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
things about making a website more eye-catching and portable. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
it, we
Please check whether one of these words is redundant.
can able to
acquire the break-through in the future in the field of information technology.

I would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
grateful if you give me to the permission for two days. I am look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
22nd February 2018

Possible spelling mistake found.
Aman
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
Language is the blood of the soul into which thoughts run and out of which they grow.
Oliver Wendell Holmes

IELTS letter You are study for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter. -Ask for sometime of the complete a qualification-suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. -Say how the v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts