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Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: 1- Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. 2-Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. 3-Say how the qualification helps your job or company. v.3

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: 1- Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. 2-Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. 3-Say how the qualification helps your job or company. v. 3
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to request you two weeks off from work on next month. I have submitted my application for leave last week to the administration department, but they requested your approval on it. Recently, I have enrolled into a Project Management course at one of reputable centers, and its final exam is scheduled on next month. Therefore, I would request that you allow me this leave to have a good preparation before the exam. A night shift is available at my current project, and I suggest that I will join it beside the day shift after returning from the vacation. This is will allow me to recover any tasks that would be on hold pending on my leave. In addition, I can organize coordination meetings with my colleagues to boost the work progress. There were several courses from the same center; however, I chose the Project Management Course for its immense benefits to me and the company. It will enhance my contractual skills which we do need in the contracts while its review during the bidding stage. I can also determine the right terms and conditions in support of our company and organization. I look forward to getting my application approved. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to request you two weeks off from work on
next
month.

I have submitted my application for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
last week to the administration department,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they requested your approval on it. Recently, I have enrolled into a Project Management course at one of reputable centers, and its final exam
is scheduled
on
next
month.
Therefore
, I would request that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
to have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
preparation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the exam.

A night shift is available at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
project, and I suggest that I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
it beside the day shift after returning from the vacation. This is will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to recover any tasks that would be on hold pending on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
.
In addition
, I can organize coordination meetings with my colleagues to boost the work progress.

There were several courses from the same center;
however
, I chose the Project Management Course for its immense benefits to me and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. It will enhance my contractual
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
which we do need in the contracts while its review during the bidding stage. I can
also
determine the right terms and conditions in support of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and organization.

I look forward to getting my application approved.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Ayoub
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: 1- Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. 2-Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. 3-Say how the qualification helps your job or company. v. 3

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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