30/10/2017You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city. Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter- Give your reasons for wanting the job- Explain why you think you can do v.2
30/10/2017You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city. Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter- Give your reasons for wanting the job- Explain why you think you can do v. 2
Dear Sir or madame,
I am writing to express my interest in working at your firm as a local tour guide.
To begin with, my entire life has been spent in this beautiful city. I feel a deep love and a connection with this place and would like to share those feelings with guests. In addition, I heard your employees are given some special training, I hope to learn something new about the megalopolis, its history, landmarks and architecture.
Furthermore, I fit the job due to my personal characteristics. I am a well-educated, well-read, friendly, positive individual who likes to talk and socialize with others. Thus, clientele will be happy to work with me. Moreover, I am fluent in Russian, Greman, Spanish, Franch and can speak in Chinese and Japanese languages as well. So, I will be able to work with visitors from all over the world.
Finally, I have relevant experience as well. While working in a big international company as a part-time employee I have a duty to make foreign specialists comfortable in our city. So, I frequently give them improvised tours around the city. Also, I have already worked as an assistant of a tour guide for six months about a year ago in a rival company.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
Dear Sir or madame,
I am writing to express my interest in working at your firm as a local tour guide.
To
begin
with, my entire life has
been spent
in this
beautiful
city. I feel a deep
love
and a connection with this place and would like to share those feelings with guests.
In addition
, I heard your employees are
given
some
special training, I hope to learn something new about the megalopolis, its history, landmarks and architecture.
Furthermore
, I fit the job due to my personal characteristics. I am a well-educated, well-read, friendly,
positive
individual who likes to talk and socialize with others.
Thus
, clientele will be happy to work with me.
Moreover
, I am fluent in Russian,
Greman
, Spanish,
Franch
and can speak in Chinese and Japanese languages
as well
.
So
, I will be able to work with visitors from all over the world.
Finally
, I have relevant experience
as well
. While working in a
big
international
company
as a part-time employee I have a duty to
make
foreign specialists comfortable in our city.
So
, I
frequently
give them improvised tours around the city.
Also
, I have already worked as an assistant of a tour guide for six months about a year ago in a rival
company
.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely
yours,
Eugene
Dubinchuk
.
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