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the map below shows the development of village of rymouth between 1995 and present. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant. v.2

the map below shows the development of village of rymouth between 1995 and present.
The map depicts the progress of rymouth village between 1995 and present. It can be vividly seen that in 1995, there was a sea area in the south part and fishing port in the middle of the sea. In the corner side of the sea there was a cafe. Fish market was in the corner of the sea side. In the west side some shops were available. Houses were established in both side of the main road. In the east side of the main road most of the area were covered with farmland in the north and Forest Park. Hotel also situated in the downside corner of the road. Turning to rest of description, in the present village, the farmland area is convert with playground for golf and tennis. A car park also establish near the hotel. On the west side of the road housing area is increasing one new road along with houses is built in the west side. The shops is convert with restourent. There is no fishing port in the sea and fish market turned into apartments.
The map depicts the progress of
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rymouth
village between 1995 and present.

It can be
vividly
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seen
that in 1995, there was a
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sea
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area
in the south part and fishing port in the middle of the
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sea
. In the corner side of the
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sea
there was a
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cafe
. Fish market was in the corner of the
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sea
side. In the west side
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some
shops were available.
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Houses
were established
in both side of the main
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road
. In the east side of the main
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road
most of the
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area
were covered
with farmland in the north and Forest Park. Hotel
also
situated in the downside corner of the road.

Turning to rest of description, in the present village, the farmland
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area
is convert with playground for golf and tennis. A car park
also
establish near the hotel. On the west side of the
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road
housing
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area
is increasing one new
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road
along with
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houses
is built
in the west side. The shops
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is
convert with
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restourent
. There is no fishing port in the
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sea
and fish market turned into apartments.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter the map below shows the development of village of rymouth between 1995 and present.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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