Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to reserve accommodation in your hostel during our trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales. I am planning a trip for a group of students from Perth and expecting your response so that I can finalise our stay at your hostel.
We expect to be in the Snowy Mountains between June 1st and depart on 9th June. Our group has five men, seven women and a married couple - 14 in total. The five men can stay at a dormitory and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like a deluxe room. We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible. Besides, the rooms must have hot water and room heater facilities considering the cold weather.
Please also inform me about the recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own boots for bushwalking, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, like skiing. Some of our group members will hire geological picks and other equipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and other interesting geological features in the area.
I am looking forward to receiving information about the Student Hostel Services and other facilities, specifically, if the accommodation would be available during the time of our visit and if so, how can I reserve it well in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to reserve accommodation in your hostel during our trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales. I am planning a trip for a
group
of students from Perth and expecting your response
so
that I can
finalise
our stay at your hostel.
We
expect
to be in the Snowy Mountains between June 1st and depart on 9th June. Our
group
has five
men
, seven women and a married couple
-
14 in total. The five
men
can stay at a dormitory and the women are happy to share
rooms
,
but
the married couple would like a deluxe
room
. We hope to
keep
our expenses as low as possible.
Besides
, the
rooms
must
have hot
water
and
room
heater facilities considering the
cold
weather.
Please
also
inform me about the recreational services in the area. The
group
will bring their
own
boots for
bushwalking
,
but
we are hoping to hire equipment for
other
sports, like skiing.
Some
of our
group
members will hire geological picks and
other
equipment, if possible. We
also
need to know about access to caves and
other
interesting geological features in the area.
I am looking forward to receiving information about the Student Hostel Services and
other
facilities,
specifically
, if the accommodation would be available during the time of our visit and if
so
, how can I reserve it well in advance.
Yours
faithfully
,
Adam Smith
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