You are looking for summer job. Write a letter to an employer. -introduce yourself-explain what type of job you like-explain your previous experiences and related skillsYou should write at least 150 words. v.2
You are looking for summer job. Write a letter to an employer. -introduce yourself-explain what type of job you like-explain your previous experiences and related skills v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you here to express my interest to join you company for summer openings.
I am shahla, a senior year student from University of Oklahoma. Currently I am residing in the south side of the city.
As I am studying in department of Mass communication, I would prefer to work in the communication department, if possible. Assisting communication officer, co-ordinating with press and updating social media contents are some of the tasks I enjoy. I am
I may mention that I have worked as press and media co-ordinator at Toronto Internatioanal Film Festival for last two years. Not only in organizing press kit, but you can also relay on me to maintain the social media platforms. I am also comfortable using photo editing and video editing softwares like photoshop, final cut pro etc.
Please keep be informed if any opportunity arises in your company.
Yours faithfully,
shahla
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you here to express my interest to  
join
 you  
company
 for summer openings.
I am  
shahla
, a senior year student from University of Oklahoma.  
Currently
 I am residing in the south side of the city.
As I am studying in department of Mass communication, I would prefer to work in the communication department, if possible. Assisting communication officer,  
co-ordinating
 with press and updating social media contents are  
some of the
 tasks I enjoy. I  
am
I may mention that I have worked as press and media  
co-ordinator
 at Toronto  
Internatioanal
 Film Festival for last two years. Not  
only
 in organizing press kit,  
but
 you can  
also
 relay on me to maintain the social media platforms. I am  
also
 comfortable using photo editing and video editing  
softwares
 like photoshop, final  
cut
 pro etc. 
Please
  keep
  be informed
 if any opportunity arises in your  
company
.
Yours  
faithfully
, 
shahla
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes