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Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c v.1

Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c v. 1
Hi Nichole, I Hope you are doing well and this letter brings you the cheerfulness. I would like to inform and need suggestion on that I am planning to look for a job in other countries. My main objective is to settle aborad as well as find jobs which is suitable for my career. As you already know, I have completed Bachelor Degree in Computer Science and Engineering. So that, i am predominantly looking for the job in Sofware sectors. In addition, as I have scarce exploration of other countries, so please assist me on the things which would really help me when I get there. Most difficult and essential things which certainly need immigrant is accommodation. I would like to know that which online reference is useful to find my needs. So please mention those details and return back to the address which I mentioned back. Your suggestion is going to be helpful for my future endeavor. I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you. With Regards, Abc
Hi Nichole,

I Hope you are doing well and this letter brings you the cheerfulness. I would like to inform and need suggestion on that I am planning to look for a job in other countries. My main objective is to settle
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aborad
as well
as find jobs which is suitable for my career. As you already know, I have completed Bachelor Degree in Computer Science and Engineering.
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So
that,
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i
am
predominantly
looking for the job in
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Sofware
sectors.
In addition
, as I have scarce exploration of other countries,
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so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
assist me on the things which would
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
there. Most difficult and essential things which
certainly
need immigrant is accommodation. I would like to know that which online reference is useful to find my needs.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
mention those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and
Consider using "return".
return back
to the address which I mentioned back. Your suggestion is going to be helpful for my future endeavor. I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you.

With Regards,

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Abc
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c v. 1

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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