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Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c v.1

Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c v. 1

Hi Nichole, I Hope you are doing well and this letter brings you the cheerfulness. I would like to inform and need suggestion on that I am planning to look for a job in other countries. My main objective is to settle aborad as well as find jobs which is suitable for my career. As you already know, I have completed Bachelor Degree in Computer Science and Engineering. So that, i am predominantly looking for the job in Sofware sectors. In addition, as I have scarce exploration of other countries, so please assist me on the things which would really help me when I get there. Most difficult and essential things which certainly need immigrant is accommodation. I would like to know that which online reference is useful to find my needs. So please mention those details and return back to the address which I mentioned back. Your suggestion is going to be helpful for my future endeavor. I am looking forward to receiving a letter from you. With Regards, Abc

Hi Nichole,

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With Regards,

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2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: Why you want to work in a different countryWhat type of work you will be looking forQuestions you have about working in a different c v. 1

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

170 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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