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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your lettersay where and when the class will be heldgive reasons why you think your friend might be intereste v.2

You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your lettersay where and when the class will be heldgive reasons why you think your friend might be intereste v. 2
Dear Sara, How are you and how is everyone doing in your family? Hoping that everyone must be their lives to the fullest. Recently I came across an advertisement of cooking classes being held at " Serena polytechnic college" commencing from next Friday. Training shall be provided by experienced and professional chefs currently serving at 5 star hotels. I have also developed interest for cooking because I am getting married in 3 months and you have naturally blessed with this inborn talent. In my stance, We should definitely avail this golden opportunity without a second thought. The first person that came across my mind after going through the advert was you because I clearly remember how much you loved preparing meals and desserts for me and your siblings. In addition, we used to absolutely cherish and enjoy your talent and you always stated that you wanted to adopt cookery as your profession. I was wondering if you could pay me a visit this weekend at my apartment, so that we could discuss the admission protocols and documents required to be submitted. I shall be back by 3 from local store after doing my groceries so you could visit at that time. Eagerly looking forward to seeing you at my place. We shall revive some old memories followed by a tempting dinner made by me. Do write me back expressing your thoughts regarding this course and wether you will be visiting my place or not. Feeling really excited to meet you in person. Warm Wishes, Sana.
Dear Sara,

How are you and how is everyone doing in your family? Hoping that everyone
must
be their
lives
to the fullest. Recently I came across an
advertisement of
cooking classes
being held
at
&quot
; Serena polytechnic
college&quot
; commencing from
next
Friday. Training shall
be provided
by experienced and professional chefs
currently
serving at
5 star
hotels. I have
also
developed interest for cooking
because
I am getting married in 3 months and you have
naturally
blessed with this inborn talent. In my stance, We should definitely avail this golden opportunity without a second
thought
.

The
first
person that came across my mind after going through the advert was you
because
I
clearly
remember how much you
loved
preparing meals and desserts for me and your siblings.
In addition
, we
used
to
absolutely
cherish and enjoy your talent and you always stated that you wanted to adopt cookery as your profession.

I was wondering if you could pay me a visit this weekend at my apartment,
so
that we could discuss the admission protocols and documents required to
be submitted
. I shall be back by 3 from local store after doing my groceries
so
you could visit at that time.

Eagerly
looking forward to seeing you at my place. We shall revive
some
old
memories followed by a tempting dinner made by me. Do write me back expressing your thoughts regarding this course and
wether
you will be visiting my place or not. Feeling
really
excited to
meet
you in person.

Warm Wishes,

Sana.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your lettersay where and when the class will be heldgive reasons why you think your friend might be intereste v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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