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Write a letter to your friend who is working in multinational company. In your letter- Tell him/her that there is a job vacancy in their company. - Say how you found out about the job. - Ask for help with your job application. - Explain why you are intereste v.2

Write a letter to your friend who is working in multinational company. In your letter- Tell him/her that there is a job vacancy in their company. - Say how you found out about the job. - Ask for help with your job application. - Explain why you are intereste v. 2
Dear Dwarf, Last time when we mat, you mentioned about your new company Apple Infotech. I hope you are still with the same company. Recently I was searching job on portal and found out vacancy of trainer in Apple infotech at Delhi. Most of the details have been mentioned but salary and other perks have not been published. I wrote a mail to enquire about salary and particularly transportation facility for office. However, I have not got any reply of my mail. May I ask you to help me to get answered these queries. I will forward the queries to you too. As you are aware that i have been providing training for last two years as freelancer and got good experience as a trainer. Therefore, I have decided to apply for this post. It was also mentioned that this engagement is for five years and extendable so I wish to work with your company. I am looking forward to get reply from you. Yours sincerely XYZ
Dear Dwarf,

Last time when
we mat
, you
mentioned about your
new
company
Apple
Infotech
. I hope you are
still
with the same
company
. Recently I was searching job on portal and found out vacancy of trainer in Apple
infotech
at Delhi. Most of the
details
have
been mentioned
but
salary and other perks have not
been published
. I wrote a mail to
enquire
about salary and
particularly
transportation facility for office.
However
, I have not
got
any reply of my mail. May I ask you to
help
me to
get
answered these queries. I will forward the queries to you too.

As you are aware that
i
have been providing training for last two years as freelancer and
got
good
experience as a trainer.

Therefore
, I have decided to apply for this post. It was
also
mentioned that this engagement is for five years and extendable
so
I wish to work with your
company
. I am looking forward to
get
reply from you.

Yours
sincerely


XYZ
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is working in multinational company. In your letter- Tell him/her that there is a job vacancy in their company. - Say how you found out about the job. - Ask for help with your job application. - Explain why you are intereste v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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