Dear sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing great. its a good news that your organization is appreciating people, who are helping their community, by giving them awards. it will be a lot motivating for them.
On this auspicious occasion, i would like to bring in your information the person who is doing a commendable work. Mr. Anwar, doctor by profession, is running various campaigns to bring awareness in sociaty about healthy diet and benefits of exercise. last year he did many free boot camps to guide people about their health.
in this era of busy life, he is putting his comfort aside for the sake of health of their community fellows. moreover he is doing it free while the cost of healthcare is a lot.
I believed that it will be an honour for him if your newspaper publish an ad, about him and his work, on front page for one day. it will not only encourage him that we appreciate his efforts but also will be helpful for his mission.
Dear sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing great.
its
a
good
news that your organization is appreciating
people
, who are helping their community, by giving them awards.
it
will be a lot motivating for them.
On this auspicious occasion,
i
would like to bring in your information the person who is doing a commendable work. Mr. Anwar, doctor by profession, is running various campaigns to bring awareness in
sociaty
about healthy diet and benefits of exercise.
last
year he did
many
free boot camps to guide
people
about their health.
in
this era of busy life, he is putting his comfort aside for the sake of health of their community fellows.
moreover
he is doing it free while the cost of healthcare is a lot.
I believed that it will be an
honour
for him if your newspaper publish an ad, about him and his work, on front page for one day.
it
will not
only
encourage him that we appreciate his efforts
but
also
will be helpful for his mission.
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