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The there pie charts below show the change in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, 2001. v.2

The there pie charts below show the change in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, 2001. v. 2
The given circular layout depict the information about the school in UK by changes spending about annual into 1981, 1991 and 2001 country through this essay. it is clear and coherent representation. On one side, the data is calibrated of total school spending into per centum. In step first, the data of school to workers salaries, resource furniture, equipment was 28%, 15%, 15% into 1981 countury. beside, in 1991 countury the data of other workers salaries, resource, furniture and equipment were 22%, 58%, 20% respectively. On other side, the data of school spending into 2001 differ from other. However, in they had worked salaries, resource, furniture and equipment of data 9%, 15%, 23% respectively. Moreover, they had been all the of data account only for one school. from 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, it is the evident, that there is no single answer to this question nevertheless, weighing will the both use of hand at the end that in all the countury the data were either maximum of teacher salaries or minimum of insurance as well as, about according of sales in per centum.
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in UK by
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changes
spending about annual into 1981, 1991 and 2001 country through this essay.
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is
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clear
and coherent representation.

On one side, the
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data
is calibrated
of total
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school
spending into per centum. In step
first
, the
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data
of
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school
to workers
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salaries
, resource furniture, equipment was 28%, 15%, 15% into 1981
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countury
.
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beside
, in 1991
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countury
the
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data
of other workers
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salaries
, resource, furniture and equipment were 22%, 58%, 20%
respectively
.

On other side, the
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data
of
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school
spending into 2001 differ from other.
However
, in they had worked
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salaries
, resource, furniture and equipment of
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data
9%, 15%, 23%
respectively
.
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, they had been all the of
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data
account
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for one
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school
.
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from
1981, 1991 and 2001.

Overall
, it is the evident, that there is no single answer to this question
nevertheless
, weighing will the both
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use
of hand at the
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that in all the
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countury
the
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were either maximum of teacher
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salaries
or minimum of insurance
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as well as
, about
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according of
sales in per centum.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter The there pie charts below show the change in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, 2001. v. 2

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  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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