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You are going to visit the UK for an ‘English and Homestay’ program. Write a letter to the host family. In your letter: – introduce yourself– ask the family some questions to get essential information about the UK– tell the family the scheduled d v.2

You are going to visit the UK for an ‘English and Homestay’ program. Write a letter to the host family. In your letter: – introduce yourself– ask the family some questions to get essential information about the UK– tell the family the scheduled d v. 2
Dear Wheeler family, I hope this letter will find all of you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you about my stay to attend an ' English and homestay program' in your country. My name is Lavanya Kapoor and I am studying mass media and communication diploma at Delhi University. I will be your guest for ten days and I am keen to learn English from native speakers like you. Well, this would be the first time I would visit any other country. Therefore, I would like to know the climate conditions in your country so that I can pack my luggage accordingly. Moreover, It would be great If you could spare a few minutes to suggest some informative websites that truly describe the culture of the UK. At the same time, I am feeling excited to meet you all. My flight from India to the UK will land on 17th June at 6 in the evening. It would probably take me an hour to reach your place. It would be of great help If you could suggest some economical means of transportation from the airport. See all of you soon! Best wishes, Lavanya Kapoor
Dear Wheeler family,

I hope this letter will find all of you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you about my stay to attend an ' English and homestay
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My name is
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Lavanya
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Kapoor and
I am studying mass media and communication diploma at Delhi University. I will be your guest for ten
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
days and
I am keen to learn English from native speakers like you.

Well, this would be the
first
time I would visit any other country.
Therefore
, I would like to know the climate conditions in your country
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so
that I can pack my luggage
accordingly
.
Moreover
, It would be great If you could spare a few minutes to suggest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
informative websites that
truly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
the culture of the UK.

At the same time, I am feeling excited to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you all. My flight from India to the UK will land on 17th June at 6 in the evening. It would
probably
take me an hour to reach your place. It would be of great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
If you could suggest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
economical means of transportation from the airport.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
all of you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
!

Best wishes,

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Lavanya
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Kapoor
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are going to visit the UK for an ‘English and Homestay’ program. Write a letter to the host family. In your letter: – introduce yourself– ask the family some questions to get essential information about the UK– tell the family the scheduled d v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
202 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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