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You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the problem-Provide an appropriate solution v.2

You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the problem-Provide an appropriate solution v. 2
Dear Rama, I' m writing this letter to you to draw your attention towards debris which is being left near my house regularly. My name is Rehan and I' ve been living in this tower for last 2 years. My flat is in the rose tower adjacent to your house. It' s in my observation from past many days that your maid is placing rubbish collected from your apartment in front of the gate. Likewise, it has become a store house of plethora of insects which may propel to epidemic in our vicinity. Moreover, the place always experiences unpleasant smell. However, there are various ways through them you can manage it. Firstly, our society give the facility of door step collection with nominal monthly fee. Secondly, you can also keep it in the dustbin at the ground floor. It' s regular collected by the cleaning staff. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you. For the more it will help our society to be a more pleasant place to live. Yours sincerely, John
Dear Rama,

I&
#039; m writing this letter to you to draw your attention towards debris which is being
left
near my
house
regularly
.

My name is
Rehan
and
I&
#039; ve been living in this tower for last 2 years. My flat is in the rose tower adjacent to your
house
.

It&
#039; s in my observation from past
many
days that your maid is placing rubbish collected from your apartment in front of the gate.
Likewise
, it has become a store
house
of plethora of insects which may propel to epidemic in our vicinity.
Moreover
, the place always experiences unpleasant smell.

However
, there are various ways through them you can manage it.
Firstly
, our society give the facility of door step collection with nominal monthly fee.
Secondly
, you can
also
keep
it in the dustbin at the
ground floor
.
It&
#039; s regular collected by the cleaning staff.

I look forward to hearing a
positive
response from you. For the more it will
help
our society to be a more pleasant place to
live
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the problem-Provide an appropriate solution v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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