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You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications v.1

You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this with regard to the advertised position of, required marketing manager in the johnson associates, in the Sunday Times newspaper on 24/7/19. To begin with, I am farwah ahmad. I received my Master' s in business administration. Before that, my undergraduate degree is in business administration as well. Besides, I have strong communication, interpersonal, and critical thinking skills. Further to this, I have since worked in a private advertising firm as an advertiser. Where my main responsibilities were to make an effective brand strategy, to head a team of six members and give them innovative ideas to launch new products, to make creative advertisement for the new launch product, and to sell the product. Moreover, I believe in customer satisfaction so, and I have a strategy of think less like a manager and more as a consumer. To do this, I stay engaged with the consumers through feedback. I believe I have all the relevant experience required. Please, find my CV attached for your perusal. If you have any further questions, you can contact me on the given mail address. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this with regard to the advertised position of, required marketing manager in the
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johnson
associates, in
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the Sunday Times
newspaper on 24/7/19.

To
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begin
with, I am
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farwah
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ahmad
. I received my
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Master&
#039; s in business administration.
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Before
that, my undergraduate degree is in business administration
as well
.
Besides
, I have strong communication, interpersonal, and critical thinking
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skills
.

Further
to this, I have since worked in a private advertising firm as an advertiser. Where my main responsibilities were to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an effective brand strategy, to head a team of six members and give them innovative
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
to launch new products, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
creative advertisement for the new launch product, and to sell the product.
Moreover
, I believe in customer satisfaction
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, and I have a strategy of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
less like a manager and more
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
a consumer. To do this, I stay engaged with the consumers through feedback.

I believe I have all the relevant experience required.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, find my CV attached for your perusal. If you have any
further
questions, you can contact me on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
mail address.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours
sincerely
,
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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