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ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference v.2

ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference v. 2
Dear Dr. Cotton, I am writing to request a reference letter from you as I am applying for a position with a company I always dreamed of working. The title of the position is Manufacturing Quality Engineer and it is with a leading car manufacturer, Fiat Chrysler Automobiles. The job involves mainly fixing Quality related problems of general assembly, therefore, the work would be in rotating shifts and most of the time would be spent on shop floor. I have been always passionate about automobiles and this will be perfect start to my professional career. Moreover, I will be graduating in coming two months, after graduation I will have to start paying installments of student loan, hence, it is essential for me to seize this opportunity before graduation. As I have conducted a research under your supervision during my bachelor studies, I would like to request you to mention about my research project on modern generation fuels used in automobiles. In addition, few words about my skills and character would be highly appreciated. Hopefully, this reference letter would definitely make my application noticeable. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours Sincerely, Nilesh Shah
Dear Dr. Cotton,

I am writing to request a reference letter from you as I am applying for a position with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
I always dreamed of working.

The title of the position is Manufacturing Quality Engineer and it is with a leading car manufacturer, Fiat Chrysler Automobiles. The job involves
mainly
fixing Quality related problems of general assembly,
therefore
, the work would be in rotating shifts and most of the time would
be spent
on shop floor.

I have been always passionate about automobiles and this will be perfect
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to my professional career.
Moreover
, I will be graduating in coming two months, after graduation I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
paying installments of student loan,
hence
, it is essential for me to seize this opportunity
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
graduation.

As I have conducted
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "research".
a research
under your supervision during my bachelor studies, I would like to request you to
Did you mean simply "mention my"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mention about my
research project on modern generation fuels
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in automobiles.
In addition
, few words about my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and character would be
highly
appreciated.

Hopefully
, this reference letter would definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
my application noticeable.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nilesh Shah
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your teacher could put in the reference v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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