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Your neighbours have recently written to you co complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: -Explain the reasons for the noise-Apologise-Describe what action you will take v.2

Your neighbours have recently written to you co complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: -Explain the reasons for the noise-Apologise-Describe what action you will take v. 2
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, I received your letter claiming about the noise from my apartment. I really regret about this so I would like to write you this letter to make some clarification. Actually, since we are living in an old building, there are some items that need to be upgraded. In fact, I’m replacing the ceramic flat and the noise comes exactly from the maintenance process. You know, my workers need to remove the old ceramic and clean the flat before install the new ones. To limit the noise, I told the workers not to do any construction during the weekend since I understand that you need to relax after a working week. All the works are also had to be finished before 5pm every day and no more overtime workings is scheduled. I really apologise for the inconvenience caused. Should you have any addition queries, please let me know. Thank you and best regards,
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

I received your letter claiming about the noise from my apartment. I
really
regret about this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I would like to write you this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
clarification.

Actually, since we are living in an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
building, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
items that need to
be upgraded
. In fact, I’m replacing the ceramic flat and the noise
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
exactly from the maintenance process. You know, my workers need to remove the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
ceramic and clean the flat
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
install the new ones.

To limit the noise, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
the workers not to do any construction during the weekend since I understand that you need to relax after a working week. All the works are
also
had to
be finished
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
5pm every day and no more overtime workings
is scheduled
.

I
really
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for the inconvenience caused. Should you have any addition queries,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know.

Thank you and best regards,
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you co complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: -Explain the reasons for the noise-Apologise-Describe what action you will take v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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