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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. v.2

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disagreement with the decision to expand the Miami International Airport as it has many detrimental consequences. My home is situated on the Callos street - next to the airport, and I am hoping that you would publish an editorial to protest the development. The residents are constantly confronted with the noise and turbulence problems, created by the flights arriving and departing the airport. This is a significant issue as a major part of our population comprises young school children. The nuisance does not allow the old people a peaceful night either. Moreover, the commotion caused by the flight sometimes results in cracks or even broken glass doors and house cabinets. Now given the situation, I believe that Miami is not among the front line airports of the country and there is a restriction imposed by the government on the number of flights operated daily. I would like to plea to the president an obstruction on this plan because an expansion of the airport will aggravate the problems in our community. An increase in the number of flights will cause more turbulence and nuisance, which is explicit. I am not against any development in our country and I believe it would be ideal if the authority could come up with an alternate approach to this issue. Last but not least, I would request your editorial section to publish a report on this moot issue. In anticipation of favourable actions. Yours faithfully, Jones Nathan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my disagreement with the decision to expand the Miami International
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Airport
as it has
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many
detrimental consequences. My home
is situated
on the
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Callos
street
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-
next
to the
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airport
, and I am hoping that you would publish an editorial to protest the development.

The residents are
constantly
confronted with the noise and turbulence problems, created by the
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flights
arriving and departing the
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airport
. This is a significant issue as a major part of our population comprises young school children. The nuisance does not
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allow
the
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old
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people
a peaceful night either.
Moreover
, the commotion caused by the
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flight
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sometimes
results in cracks or even broken glass doors and
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house
cabinets.

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Now
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given
the situation, I believe that Miami is not among the front line
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airports
of the country and there is a restriction imposed by the
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government
on the number of
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flights
operated daily. I would like to plea to the president an obstruction on this plan
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because
an expansion of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
will aggravate the problems in our community. An increase in the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flights
will cause more turbulence and nuisance, which is explicit. I am not against any development in our country and I believe it would be ideal if the authority could
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come
up with an alternate approach to this issue.

Last
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but
not least, I would request your editorial section to publish a report on this moot issue.

In anticipation of
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favourable
actions.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jones Nathan
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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