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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. v.1

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, As a local resident, I would like to protest the development of our local airport as it would bring many negative consequences. I am writing to request you to publish an editorial in your newspaper regarding the problems the expansion of the local airport would cause. I live near the Bogra International Airport where more than two thousand citizens, including children and older people, reside. Living near the airport is already difficult as harsh noises are frequent, especially at night when the aeroplanes land or depart the runway. If the number of flights is increased, the noise will become unbearable. This could result in immense distress to the people. Besides, it would worsen the traffic condition of the adjacent roads. Moreover, the airport authority wants to expand the area; so our lovely park, which is essential for every citizen of this locality, will be diminished. Due to this, everyone in our locality is against this proposed development. If you agree with me, please publish an editorial to your newspaper to disagree with this unnecessary and detrimental development. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Shohag Khan
Dear Sir or Madam,

As a local resident, I would like to protest the development of our local
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airport
as it would bring
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many
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negative
consequences. I am writing to request you to publish an editorial in your newspaper regarding the problems the expansion of the local
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airport
would cause.

I
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live
near the
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Bogra
International
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Airport
where more than two thousand citizens, including children and older
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people
, reside. Living near the
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airport
is already difficult as harsh noises are frequent,
especially
at night when the
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aeroplanes
land or depart the runway. If the number of flights
is increased
, the noise will become unbearable. This could result in immense distress to the
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people
.
Besides
, it would worsen the traffic condition of the adjacent roads.

Moreover
, the
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airport
authority wants to expand the area;
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so
our lovely park, which is essential for every citizen of this locality, will
be diminished
. Due to this, everyone in our locality is against this proposed development. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with me,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
publish an editorial to your newspaper to disagree with this unnecessary and detrimental development.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Shohag
Khan
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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