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1. With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

1. With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? v. 2
Internet provide us the power to share our insight about a plethora of products and services. Several people agree that customers perceive it as a powerful means of sharing their views, whereas other opine that people uses it as a means of fiving false information. In my opinion, I do believe that online reviews can be beneficial and is considered as a deciding factor for customers. Many individuals believe that by providing comments on the quality of a product or service online will provide a deeper understanding to the company about the product. This will be beneficial as based on the reviews they will take the necessary steps to improve the features of goods which will not only increase in the customer satisfaction and high customer retention but will also help the company to earn sustainable profits. Moreover, the remarks on the commodities will aid the people in making judgements regarding the buying. To elucidate, people before choosing the restaurants generally check online on websites like Zomato. com for the remarks made on the various dining places. However, others agree that the online reviews are biased and not authentic. Many companies give false and misleading information about the goods of their competing firms in order to hamper their sales and profits. Furthermore, it affects the image of the company as people make wrong judgements about the goods and services of the organisation. To illustrate, a recent report as reflected that more than 80% of the information provided online on products are not genuine thus leading to customers making wrong purchases. To conclude, I vehemently agree that online reviews are the reflection of the quality and feature of goods and it helps people in making correct decision before buying them
Internet provide us the power to share our insight about a plethora of
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products
and services. Several
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people
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agree
that
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customers
perceive it as a powerful means of sharing their views, whereas other opine that
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people
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uses
it as a means of
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fiving
false information. In my opinion, I do believe that
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online
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reviews
can be beneficial and
is considered
as a deciding factor for customers.

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Many
individuals believe that by providing comments on the quality of a
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product
or service
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online
will provide a deeper understanding to the
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company
about the
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product
. This will be beneficial as based on the
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reviews
they will take the necessary steps to
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improve
the features of
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goods
which will not
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only
increase in the
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customer
satisfaction and high
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customer
retention
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but
will
also
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help
the
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company
to earn sustainable profits.
Moreover
, the remarks on the commodities will aid the
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people
in making judgements regarding the buying. To elucidate,
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people
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before
choosing the restaurants
generally
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check
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online
on websites like
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Zomato
.
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com
for the remarks made on the various dining places.

However
, others
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agree
that the
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online
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reviews
are biased
and not authentic.
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Many
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companies
give false and misleading information about the
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goods
of their competing firms in order to hamper their sales and profits.
Furthermore
, it affects the image of the
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company
as
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people
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make
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wrong
judgements about the
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goods
and services of the
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organisation
. To illustrate, a recent report as reflected that more than 80% of the information provided
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online
on
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products
are not genuine
thus
leading to
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customers
making
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wrong
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purchases
.

To conclude
, I
vehemently
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agree
that
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online
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reviews
are the reflection of the quality and feature of
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goods
and it
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helps
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people
in making correct decision
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
buying them
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter 1. With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? v. 2

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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