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You are a history teacher at a high school so you saw an advertise meant in the local newspaper about the local museum which coincided with what you are teaching in your school Write to the museum administrator In your letter Introduce yourself Inform her v.2

You are a history teacher at a high school so you saw an advertise meant in the local newspaper about the local museum which coincided with what you are teaching in your school Write to the museum administrator In your letter Introduce yourself Inform her v. 2

Dear sir I teach history to the learners of Grade 8 to 12 at Holy Angels School. The purpose of mine to penning down this is a pistol is to acquire your permission about bringing a group of students at your museum. Yes, I am a teacher and always on the look out for some innovative ways to teach history and during experiment so that students can get more interest in history. I saw you advertise meant in the yesterday' s newspaper, in which mentioned that you have added for sales

Dear sir

I teach history to the learners of Grade 8 to 12 at Holy Angels School. The purpose of mine to penning down this is a pistol is to acquire your permission about bringing a group of students at your museum.

Yes, I am a teacher and always on the look out for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 innovative ways to teach history and during experiment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that students can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more interest in history. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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added
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0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You are a history teacher at a high school so you saw an advertise meant in the local newspaper about the local museum which coincided with what you are teaching in your school Write to the museum administrator In your letter Introduce yourself Inform her v. 2

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

90 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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